Search:

Type: Posts; User: Jason Manley; Keyword(s):

Page 1 of 200 1 2 3 4

Search: Search took 0.17 seconds.

  1. Replies
    145
    Views
    3,521

    Your next goal should be putting down values at...

    Your next goal should be putting down values at 99 percent to 100 percent accuracy with each stroke. One issue you are having is you are putting down values before being 100 percent sure and then...
  2. Replies
    10
    Views
    905

    You are doing great...and challenging yourself. ...

    You are doing great...and challenging yourself. That's key to improving. I would love to see a little more analysis as you are pretty close with your method and ability to capture shape, value and...
  3. Replies
    32
    Views
    1,740

    Pushing a bit closer with the surface textures...

    Pushing a bit closer with the surface textures would take these to the next level for sure. Beautiful job. You can grab the brushes that kekai kotaki or jaime jones or daarken lim put out for free...
  4. Replies
    29
    Views
    1,568

    These are great. who is the master illustrator...

    These are great. who is the master illustrator who did the space suit piece? Beautiful studies of both the latest. What types of compositional devices are you finding in these? What are you...
  5. Replies
    6
    Views
    1,081

    Nice work! I might suggest pushing the various...

    Nice work! I might suggest pushing the various specular maps in the piece so you are letting the texture artists know more about which areas are gloss or matte or more shiny or not. the pole is...
  6. Replies
    18
    Views
    1,123

    These are getting progressively better with each...

    These are getting progressively better with each one. I really like seeing that happen. good work.

    You are getting about 90 percent there with the three most important things...shapes, values and...
  7. Replies
    3
    Views
    634

    These are a great start. You can select the...

    These are a great start. You can select the flesh on the portrait and paste it to a new layer and run a guassian blur on it and see a bit more softness in the transitions and gradients. then erase...
  8. Replies
    24
    Views
    1,439

    This is excellent. I think a little more clarity...

    This is excellent. I think a little more clarity in the brush marks in places (like the whites of the background) and it would require a double take to see the differences. You did an phenomenal...
  9. Replies
    50
    Views
    2,072

    You are doing great and making good progress so I...

    You are doing great and making good progress so I hope you will keep them rolling. Technique is strong and because of that I am most curious to hear what you are seeing when you look at the...
  10. Replies
    4
    Views
    740

    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right...

    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right direction. When you get your shapes worked out well, pay very close attention to the values. You want to match the values you see as closely as you...
  11. Replies
    9
    Views
    1,100

    A few comments...and nice work to get this...

    A few comments...and nice work to get this rolling too.

    The gerome portrait...watch the value transition between mass light and mass shadow on the head. You went a little harsh at that transition...
  12. Replies
    4
    Views
    806

    ok..these are improving and are looking great. ...

    ok..these are improving and are looking great. My only comment is to begin using more texture brushes so that you begin to capture that surface and those edges that the masters are getting. You are...
  13. Replies
    9
    Views
    1,310

    Your most recent is the most accurate so the...

    Your most recent is the most accurate so the feedback from the group is clearly being heard. Great job. The most recent is worth sharing so we will blast it out on our social media. Your analysis...
  14. Replies
    2
    Views
    580

    I am having a problem seeing your images. When...

    I am having a problem seeing your images. When you upload, please be sure that the images have all rendered as thumbnails before pushing submit. I will keep an eye open for this. The one that is...
  15. Replies
    8
    Views
    816

    These are great so far. Two small comments but...

    These are great so far. Two small comments but big concepts for you to think on and apply. 1. slowing down just a little bit early on to map out your shapes as accurately as possible will cause...
  16. Replies
    15
    Views
    933

    These are excellent and right at the level of...

    These are excellent and right at the level of finish that I like to see in the shorter studies. With that said, you are 95percent there or closer, which means you can still push for more accuracy...
  17. Replies
    35
    Views
    1,853

    Ok great to see these. First, your hard work is...

    Ok great to see these. First, your hard work is going to pay off. You are getting a lot done and that is great to see. With that said, I have a few thoughts. First, be sure you are spending more...
  18. You are doing great! There are some very nice...

    You are doing great! There are some very nice studies here. I think you must continue working on being even more accurate with your early shape mapping as you have a desire to render a little bit...
  19. Replies
    9
    Views
    590

    Just take your time to double and triple check...

    Just take your time to double and triple check your line work and shape mapping. You are right about using your hand and developing your eye. But be well aware that your mind will lie to you about...
  20. Replies
    13
    Views
    1,246

    My last comments on this are as follows. ...

    My last comments on this are as follows.

    First, the face, expression and forms/light/flesh is awesome. Beautiful work.

    The folds on the shirt would be far better more observed. It...
  21. Replies
    16
    Views
    1,212

    Try covering up or masking off all but one eye. ...

    Try covering up or masking off all but one eye. ask yourself...what emotion is happening in that eye? what precise emotion is being projected? Am I being deliberate with the emotion (even if very...
  22. Replies
    1
    Views
    296

    1. for the time you took, this is a strong...

    1. for the time you took, this is a strong start. You have a good expression going and it is headed in a great direction. It sounds like you learned a bit about not rendering too soon. That is...
  23. Sticky: all sorted. thank you!

    all sorted. thank you!
  24. Replies
    75
    Views
    3,445

    Sticky: sorted...thanks for letting me know bs and crew.

    sorted...thanks for letting me know bs and crew.
  25. Replies
    48
    Views
    1,358

    Edges and shapes are 95 percent there. You are a...

    Edges and shapes are 95 percent there. You are a bit soft there in places (the rim lighting shape on the side of the face for example) and that rim light shape is a bit thin compared to the...
Results 1 to 25 of 5000
Page 1 of 200 1 2 3 4
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook