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    i merged the threads to keep both pieces in the...

    i merged the threads to keep both pieces in the same thread. watch the eyes..they seem a bit big. also the cup/mug seems to be slightly wider. keep checking your shapes. good work.

    jm
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    it's looking great. watch out for the shape...

    it's looking great. watch out for the shape behind the neck..it looks like hair instead of something on the curtain. same goes for the shape above the hat that is spiked..looks kind of like it is...
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    nice work on your value transitions...you would...

    nice work on your value transitions...you would be well served to introduce some value or texture into the background as it is very flat at the moment, and without interest. the eyebrows seem overly...
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    coming along very well. value range is better. ...

    coming along very well. value range is better. your eyes look a little big in this one. I think you need to pay very close attention to soft and sharp edges once you let your eye rest on the focal...
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    really nice start on this. a bit of surface...

    really nice start on this. a bit of surface texture might add some interest...even noise...something to cut back on the overly smooth photoshop vibe...just an opinion from where i am sitting. even...
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    take a five min break every 20 mins as if it is...

    take a five min break every 20 mins as if it is law. every 90 mins take a 10-15 min break. go outside. get fresh air. eat healthy.

    oh...red bull. :)
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    are you working on gray paper or white? if...

    are you working on gray paper or white? if white, please adjust the image in photoshop so it matches your original, then i can give feedback on values and such. if you are working on gray paper...
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    please see my prior comment. if we can get you...

    please see my prior comment. if we can get you to slow down and really get your shapes mapped out well you will see so much progress. take your time. you are rushing a bit.


    jm
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    the cleopatra you have a bit stronger light on...

    the cleopatra you have a bit stronger light on the figure. double check your lights and darks at the very end to be sure you are on point. the pastoral scene is awesome...great job. watch the cow...
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    vonsar that is a fabulous crit. thank you so...

    vonsar that is a fabulous crit. thank you so much.

    When you are first getting started it is very important to really focus in on the mapping out of your shapes as accurately as you can possibly...
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    beautiful beautiful job. you are absolutely on...

    beautiful beautiful job. you are absolutely on the right track. if you make a final pass at checking all your values you will catch the last bits...like the strength of the light on the sail is...
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    beautiful job. your front most sail looks like...

    beautiful job. your front most sail looks like it could use a little stronger light on it, but outside that this is excellent.

    keep it up!!


    jm
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    Ok great to see where you are at. When you are...

    Ok great to see where you are at. When you are first getting started it is very important to really focus in on the mapping out of your shapes as accurately as you can possibly get them. If you put...
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    excellent job on the sargent portrait. no...

    excellent job on the sargent portrait. no feedback is necessary. you are up and running. great job.


    jm
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    nice job with your values. You are on the right...

    nice job with your values. You are on the right path for sure. Your shapes and values are coming along well. Be sure that you are keeping a close eye on your edges. Note where the sharpest...
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    keep focused on sharping up your edges where the...

    keep focused on sharping up your edges where the original has sharp edges...you are still a bit soft and blurry in places that can be crisp. keep up the good work.


    jm
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    very good progress on the first batch. your...

    very good progress on the first batch. your shapes, values, and edges are all improving over time. the most recent seems to be off in the face as you have drawn the head a little bigger, so I would...
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    nice job so far. the rembrandt would benefit...

    nice job so far. the rembrandt would benefit from more textured brushes to get that surface captured. the frazetta is a little less contrasting in value than you are doing, like with the strong...
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    these are beautiful. just a little bit more...

    these are beautiful.

    just a little bit more of a textured brush to capture the surface would be helpful to getting them to that next level of quality and feeling less photoshopped.

    keep up...
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    fabulous job with your shapes, values and edges. ...

    fabulous job with your shapes, values and edges. a little bit of a textured brush would get some of the surface in there, but overall these are coming along really great. keep it up.


    jm
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    these are nice. good start to this. When you...

    these are nice. good start to this.

    When you get your shapes worked out well, pay very close attention to the values. You want to match the values you see as closely as you can. It is important...
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    nice job with your values overall. When you are...

    nice job with your values overall. When you are first getting started it is very important to really focus in on the mapping out of your shapes as accurately as you can possibly get them. If you put...
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    you did a beautiful job. you will want to adjust...

    you did a beautiful job. you will want to adjust your values/colors in photoshop to match the original better if you can...all in all this is a great study and that is actually a much more difficult...
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    excellent work. watch your edges...like the...

    excellent work. watch your edges...like the light hitting the floor...there is some transition gradation happening in the original. keep up the good progress. I look forward to more updates.

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    Awesome! Your most recent is beautifully...

    Awesome!

    Your most recent is beautifully done. The Frazetta will benefit from a little bit of a textured brush to capture the surface...but all in all you are getting the accuracy level I...
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