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    not really unfortunately. the image as a...

    not really unfortunately.

    the image as a whole is working well and has come a long way... big congrats and respect on/for that!

    but you seem to be intimidated by more complex parts,...
  2. Hi Giffman, Your latest studies definitely show...

    Hi Giffman,
    Your latest studies definitely show improvement. I think that one area that may require further refinement is your line quality. When you have a drawing like this, that relies so heavily...
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  4. these older versions looked downright terrifying,...

    these older versions looked downright terrifying, the newer ones are a big improvement, good work
  5. Here's my attempt at a redraw. I can...

    Here's my attempt at a redraw.

    I can definitely see what the others are saying and honestly, I'm not sure what's wrong with the proportions even though the errors are there.

    I think that...
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    Hi giffman, The image is really coming along. I...

    Hi giffman,
    The image is really coming along. I think Bette's suggestions were an improvement as well. I think making the juggler smaller, works because it relieves some of the 'cramped' feeling...
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    Hi griffman Based on the picture you uploaded...

    Hi griffman

    Based on the picture you uploaded of those tree's i did a paintover. I think there is a few things you can do to improve this painting.

    I think if you push the king character so...
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    hi, firstoff much respect for your endurance....

    hi,

    firstoff much respect for your endurance. good work over all.

    there are some points that are bugging me though...

    one is the argument that changing the style midway has to be avoided. i...
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    Hi giffman, I was hesitant to post this due to...

    Hi giffman,
    I was hesitant to post this due to the discussion earlier, and also because Lightship beat me to the punch. I make these drawings and paintings for fun so if they are useful to someone...
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    Hi giffman, It looks like you have another great...

    Hi giffman,
    It looks like you have another great image in the works. I think your value drawing works well. The image seems to have slightly too much going on, but I think this helps to emphasize...
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    Gah!

    Ah yes. Anime influenced work. This is tricky, bet let's see how we go.

    First of all, varying styles of anime are quite stylized with abnormally large heads, 30 year old women that look like 5...
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    I love your colours first off. Warm and very...

    I love your colours first off. Warm and very homey.

    I'm assuming these are all supposed to be freeze frame sequences. Ok, but there are too many camera angles that are the same. Not enough variety...
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    Must say, I laughed so hard at this. ...

    Must say, I laughed so hard at this.

    thegiffman, I like the latest composition a lot. Benjaminba had an excellent point about the juggler making eye contact with the bandit leader to pull the...
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    Yes, I like how the bandit leader is in full...

    Yes, I like how the bandit leader is in full view.

    I really like the thumbnail you've chosen to go with. There's potential for some great expressions from the bandits! Here's a suggestion to...
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    First attachment in first post. Edit - Go...

    First attachment in first post. Edit - Go advanced. Make it small for new comers.

    The tunic the king is left with could be light, while everyone else is dressed darker.
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    first off allow me to apologize for taking your...

    first off allow me to apologize for taking your advice the wrong way. it just rubbed me the wrong way, that's no excuse for me acting like a spoiled teenager. I would also like to apologize to all...
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    You're absolutely right. I had a better example...

    You're absolutely right. I had a better example of a thumbnailing that I unfortunately lost, and the "better" illustration was merely the one I could find easiest. =P Bad form on my part.

    Edit 2:...
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    Contrasting this thread with the currently...

    Contrasting this thread with the currently ongoing battle vixens thread is a good illustration of How and How Not to intelligently handle criticism. Originally, I wanted to reply on TheGiffman's...
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    Thanks for the well considered reply, and I...

    Thanks for the well considered reply, and I understand. I appreciate that even though it bristeld your response is respectful and communicates very well. Bonus is that it provides the perfect lead-in...
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    Just a suggestion - this would be not wormview...

    Just a suggestion - this would be not wormview but at least small dog view lol:
    http://i637.photobucket.com/albums/uu97/Moongrape/wormpersp.jpg

    Drawing from such extreme ancles however exceeds my...
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    Hey Giffman, I think you've got WAAAAAAAY too...

    Hey Giffman, I think you've got WAAAAAAAY too much going on to be able to pull off at your current skill level. You just are really going to have a hard time with such a complex scene.

    A bit of...
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    Hi Altierce, It's good to see that you are still...

    Hi Altierce,
    It's good to see that you are still working on this piece. So many people tend to abandon images when things get tough with critique. Being lazy isn't going to help you any though (but...
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    Mmmm. You're right, you do clean it up thoroughly...

    Mmmm. You're right, you do clean it up thoroughly for the final, so the crit on the little gaps doesn't apply to the finished work. Personally I think it is a bad habit to get into though.

    My...
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    Hello thegiffman, I have a more general...

    Hello thegiffman,

    I have a more general critique of your work. You seem to be rather careless with your lines. Each and every line in a drawing should provide some information. Otherwise why is...
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    Hi thegiffman, The image is coming along great....

    Hi thegiffman,
    The image is coming along great. Sorry about the last drawing I posted. I thought both women were going to be old.
    The stance of the juggler is improved, but the length of his...
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