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    I'll say this for what it's worth, because I'm...

    I'll say this for what it's worth, because I'm not sure if this is the kind of critique you want or not, and I know it'll sound harsh:

    Remove the first four pages. You're infodumping for no...
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    I mean I'd like to play this game, man :) the...

    I mean I'd like to play this game, man :) the posters above are right, do lots of fundamentals etc etc to improve. But technical issues aside, I really like the concepts. Imaginative stuff.
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    I don't know what video game these are for, but...

    I don't know what video game these are for, but dayum do I ever want to play it. :P
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    Ah, I didn't realise you're intentionally leaving...

    Ah, I didn't realise you're intentionally leaving the question of whether it's a man or a woman in the suit open. That kinda makes more sense. So scratch that, an androgynous look is fine if the...
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    Well, it's fine to say you don't want a woman...

    Well, it's fine to say you don't want a woman busting through a door, but you've added the effect of SOMETHING busting through that door, and there's no indication that it's her. Whatever violence is...
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    One other thing, while I think of it - your...

    One other thing, while I think of it - your Valkyrie doesn't really seem feminine at first glance, whereas the Seraphim is unmistakably female and would be unmistakably female even if her face was...
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    @lovingit - man, I like your stuff, but the legs...

    @lovingit - man, I like your stuff, but the legs just look wrong here. Like, her shins are not long enough and her feet are too small.

    On the lighting - I don't agree with Benedikt there. The...
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    Can I just say I love the colors in this? I think...

    Can I just say I love the colors in this? I think you could add more brighter reds here and there to pop out against the blues.

    One thing about the composition - the ship in the foreground is...
  9. Thread: My art

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    Lol, I am being friendly. If I wasn't, I'd be...

    Lol, I am being friendly. If I wasn't, I'd be swearing a lot more, trust me.

    Srsly though - just paint stuff in place. Sketch first, paint in large blobs of color, and then get down to finer and...
  10. Thread: My art

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    I don't mean to pass judgement on the use of...

    I don't mean to pass judgement on the use of photo-manipulation in art. I just don't think you're being 100% up front here. The inconsistency is that you're clearly copying chunks of each piece from...
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    ...Yeah, I don't believe that for a second,...

    ...Yeah, I don't believe that for a second, sorry. The background in the Black Adam piece is a photo. You can see it was originally a different resolution by the pixelation at the edges of the...
  12. Thread: My art

    by Calireayn
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    It looks like you're creating part of these...

    It looks like you're creating part of these images using photo manipulation, not digital painting.

    I kinda don't know how to critique that, other than to point out that it's giving the Black Adam...
  13. Thread: My art

    by Calireayn
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    Hey - any chance you could post some thumbnails...

    Hey - any chance you could post some thumbnails for Black Adam or Dr. Strange so we can see your process?
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    I like the composition but the lighting/color on...

    I like the composition but the lighting/color on the dude vs the dragon snake just behind him isn't working. They're sort of blurring into each other, especially his left arm.

    Also - where's the...
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    I think you're leaving out the most interesting...

    I think you're leaving out the most interesting part of the image - the glowing crystal part on top of the tower. It's the biggest light source and it seems like the focal point of the picture - I'm...
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    double post a go go? something's wrong with the...

    double post a go go? something's wrong with the forum, sorry.
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    Hey - I'm a beginner too. Don't use Photoshop....

    Hey - I'm a beginner too.

    Don't use Photoshop. Get a pencil and paper and draw there. Then draw from life, like so many people will tell you here.

    The best thing you can do to get better is to...
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    You know the pose is... sort of boring, all...

    You know the pose is... sort of boring, all things considered.

    Seriously, she's just walking with a kind of flat expression. If you're going to do something like Matt Dixon's style then she has to...
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    You know the pose is... sort of boring, all...

    You know the pose is... sort of boring, all things considered.

    Seriously, she's just walking with a kind of flat expression. If you're going to do something like Matt Dixon's style then she has to...
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    by Calireayn
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    Art: It's not instantly readable. You have to go with...

    It's not instantly readable. You have to go with another font.

    Also, if you're posting a logo, I think it'd be a good idea to post it in various sizes and in B&W so it's easy to see how it works...
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    Bendy giraffe neck is bendy. Man, you have to...

    Bendy giraffe neck is bendy.

    Man, you have to fix her neck. That is not an angle that anyone holds naturally while doing what she's doing. Seriously, just take her head and tilt it 15 degrees to...
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    Also gonna add that I agree about the neck. Less...

    Also gonna add that I agree about the neck. Less bendy, because dayum is that an uncomfortable pose to do. Also the neck is plain too long.

    I like the expression. She looks like she's about to go...
  23. Horned Tektite. Or something. I have no idea...

    Horned Tektite. Or something.

    I have no idea how to do textures and shading.
  24. All I can say is at least I tried :( So this...

    All I can say is at least I tried :(

    So this is an emerald hive. The hive is also the queen, and she is composed mostly of acidic goo which is used to break down rocks in the creation of more...
  25. ...I have no idea.

    ...I have no idea.
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