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    SketchBook: Hey Nice works. Your coloring is nice although...

    Hey Nice works. Your coloring is nice although its a bit flat. The forms and volumes are not felt in the paintings.You can try using bigger brushes in photoshop and paint colors on top just to get...
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    The crack on the wall behind her is pretty much...

    The crack on the wall behind her is pretty much following the same line of her body and creates a strong and distracting tangent line. If matching her form was not intentional I would recommend...
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    The lighting in this last one is much improved,...

    The lighting in this last one is much improved, in my opinion. How much further are you going with it?
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    Her hair is totally defying all physics; I'd...

    Her hair is totally defying all physics; I'd straighten it out some instead of having it hold those perfect curls. I also vote for the green lighting back; it gave the piece more atmosphere.

    Also,...
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    it feels like her head is a bit too small and the...

    it feels like her head is a bit too small and the deltoid is completely off. i also like the cyan light wash from the first version.
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    looks much more improved, but the shadows look...

    looks much more improved, but the shadows look fuzzy
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    I like the mood and atmosphere in the first one...

    I like the mood and atmosphere in the first one better (the greenish lighting was really nice), but the rest of the changes in the second one look much better. The arm still looks a bit too long to...
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    The stockings and the hair are a nice addition. ...

    The stockings and the hair are a nice addition. I like the changes, personally. I think it's really cool: definitely a different concept.
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    I really like compose. But something wrong with...

    I really like compose. But something wrong with anatomy:
    Torso too long, in my opinion.
    And will be better if you render a skin sharplier.

    And 1st ver better than 2nd. =)
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    I like the way the faces are done, it's a nice...

    I like the way the faces are done, it's a nice style. I would try and adapt the clothing to the same rendering process. The texture looks like a preset brush with a blur filter over it, so it stands...
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    The scaling is better, I would add just one more...

    The scaling is better, I would add just one more plank to the top of the building on the right to bring it level with the one on the left. The guy now looks like he is floating, so I would add some...
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    One more thing I just noticed. The structures on...

    One more thing I just noticed. The structures on both sides of him are too short in relation to your character. It looks like if he were to walk into one his head would pretty much touch the ceiling....
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    Do you have a perspective version by any chance,...

    Do you have a perspective version by any chance, or something that shows the vanishing points you used? Regardless, the first thing you want to do is pick one of the two buildings in the foreground...
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    Biggest issue for me atm are also the edges and...

    Biggest issue for me atm are also the edges and the colour. Your colours have to interact more. The blue of the jeans wouldn't be this blue in an environment as brown as the desert. Dirty the blue up...
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    I think that the blurriness of most of the...

    I think that the blurriness of most of the composition is unnecessary and doesn't help the piece, especially the soft edges on the left building. I also see some perspective issues with your...
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    The arm is kind of funny. You've drawn it at full...

    The arm is kind of funny. You've drawn it at full frontal even though the body is turned at 3/4ths.

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    I still see white on the ribbons! The skin tone...

    I still see white on the ribbons! The skin tone is far too close to that of your BG so parts blend in, especially the hand with the galaxy. Use the color picker tool and look where the colors on her...
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    In my opinion the green of her dress might...

    In my opinion the green of her dress might benefit from being changed to another color. You have a beautiful warm color palette going on, and then there is the lime green. Try changing it to various...
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    haha definite improvement there~ still, might...

    haha definite improvement there~
    still, might want to watch the anatomy. Her right foot might just be dislocated D:
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    I'm having thoughts of food and bounty in the...

    I'm having thoughts of food and bounty in the background. Might give an opportunity to add some more color and depth. Legs in version two are a definite improvement!
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    the picture of the dark hole/vortex..thing...

    the picture of the dark hole/vortex..thing [excuse my lack of proper astronomical terms] is very out of place. it is much more detailed [obviously, because it is a picture] than the rest of the...
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    You know, I prefer this cropped down version. If...

    You know, I prefer this cropped down version. If you brought the lamp down a bit and cut off some of the top of the image it would be even better. The big thing now is that it looks blurry, like a...
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    Sorry ! that was a little vague, wasn't it? I...

    Sorry ! that was a little vague, wasn't it? I did a paintover. I think her left leg angle was off so I sketched over it - I'm sure her right leg is wrong, not sure why - I think at this angle you...
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    Hi I'll add a few thoughts; first the story is...

    Hi

    I'll add a few thoughts; first the story is interesting and could make a fine image. However there isn't anything here that conveys the main points i.e. she is being transformed, she is...
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    Well the image doesnt do anything for me and I...

    Well the image doesnt do anything for me and I think its got flaws and doesnt tell me a story. right now its just a naked girl on the floor with a thing on her leg. I did a paintover where I altered...
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