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    Art: Actually, the way she's holding her arms, her...

    Actually, the way she's holding her arms, her elbows would reach lower than if her arms were hanging straight down. I even check it on myself.
  2. Thread: Red Paint

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    the biggest issue with this piece is the story....

    the biggest issue with this piece is the story. First off, the girl's pose is very stiff. She is also holding a sword in an awkward way. Beyond that, you have a calm mood, with a happy girl riding...
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    Composition: You cut the man off at the wrists...

    Composition: You cut the man off at the wrists and waist. Terrible places to cut someone off and looks like you're trying to get away with not painting the hands, especially with that board at top,...
  4. Thread: First time!

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    just a quck redline to show how much further you...

    just a quck redline to show how much further you could push the poses.
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    it's looking good so far, but it feels like...

    it's looking good so far, but it feels like you're playing it safe. Your robot seems a bit generic right now. What does it do? Construction, fighting, just standing there? It's great you took...
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    Sticky: Art: some 20 minute poses

    some 20 minute poses
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    The breasts seem like only they're only highlight...

    The breasts seem like only they're only highlight with no place for color identity. Also, both breasts seem equally lit, which shouldn't be the case, and overly lit when compared to the stomach area....
  8. be aware of your perspective. As of right now,...

    be aware of your perspective. As of right now, the horizon line is near the bottom of the canvas yet the giant statue seems to be seen from directly in front rather than an ant's eye view. Both the...
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    Personally, I'm not too fond of the composition,...

    Personally, I'm not too fond of the composition, but, like everyone else so far, the process seems legit. I've known a number of other artists who use the same technique (but mostly only for shapes,...
  10. Thread: concept WIP

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    there are several proportional issues throughout...

    there are several proportional issues throughout the piece. Broad shoulders, breasts too low, leg misplaced, the figure looks to be tip toed, the facial proportions are too low, and some anatomy...
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    SketchBook: it's been a while

    It's been a long time since my last post. I've just been swamped, but I've still been working hard at my drawing. here is an update.
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    Art: First off, great images. However, I agree with...

    First off, great images.
    However, I agree with what has been said. It's very important that the text, what it says and how it appears in the book, should further develop mood, anticipation, focus,...
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    I don't know much about water so I can help you...

    I don't know much about water so I can help you much beyond this comment: It doesn't look like water, it looks more like plastic wrap. oh, and the water spilling onto the sand looks like how a glass...
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    the first piece is definitely the strongest but,...

    the first piece is definitely the strongest but, along with the lips, the hair seems flat. The hair should have a little modeling done to it, too.

    In the second image, things are starting to work...
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    you should clean up your silhouettes. I can't...

    you should clean up your silhouettes. I can't tell what's going on in the image. You should decide what everything is before you put in random shapes. The bat is too close to the center of the image....
  16. There are two components to perspective. The...

    There are two components to perspective. The first is how our eyes see the world, which is known as linear perspective. The second component is how our brain sees perspective. The latter is usually...
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    you're character has 3 colors, white, black, and...

    you're character has 3 colors, white, black, and green. Add more values, please! And add more colors. Your highlights could be a yellow-green and your shadows a blue-green. I think a good start would...
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    you're doing pretty good so I'm going to give a...

    you're doing pretty good so I'm going to give a harsh crit. The drawing looks like a bad copy of the photograph. I can understand that after 3 years, you're trying to re-grasp technique. However,...
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    it seems you have a hard time finding values. I'd...

    it seems you have a hard time finding values. I'd suggest you try doing painting using only white and black paint (and mixes between). Once you can create recognizable images with black and white,...
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    detail is great, but make sure you use some line...

    detail is great, but make sure you use some line hierarchy to help guide the viewer, ie using bolder lines for the silhouette. If you do plan on shading it, then instead use values to create the...
  21. Thread: 1st Post

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    One more thing I'd suggest and you can finally...

    One more thing I'd suggest and you can finally get the details in. Make the sky set the mood, as well. Some nice ominous clouds and interesting spots of light. I suggest this mainly because my eye...
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    well, then I'll start out by saying the palette...

    well, then I'll start out by saying the palette is not helping. His lips are too red, his eyes appear to have too much make up and his hair is rolled up like a woman's. His neck is thin and his...
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    As the waves get further in the background, there...

    As the waves get further in the background, there crests and troughs should be evening out more with the horizon.
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    when I first saw the image, I thought the shroom...

    when I first saw the image, I thought the shroom was it the foreground and the guy in the background. I think you need to add more depth cues to the shroom to fix this. For example, you can make the...
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    you won't learn how to draw backgrounds by not...

    you won't learn how to draw backgrounds by not drawing backgrounds. If you don't like it, try it again.
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