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Is there something you're unhappy with?
I don't really want to give you direction with the trees, because I have trouble with my own pieces doing that! :D
I think you've got nice sense of...
Also looking at it, the yellow highlight should really be lighter becuase - and to disagree with Quigleyer - you have plenty of colours there already, just not as much tonal variation as you need.
Hey that looks just like mine! (lol)
Maybe the lack of tonal contrast, makes it seem like an abstract shape as opposed to a form.
And as said above, the edges aren't really hard enough to...
Another problem here; to give you a scapegoat, is the photograph itself is flat. It's a little low contrast.
But we can't really blame the inanimate object. I get the feeling your were a little...
Here we go, was way more difficult than I thought compositionally. You should play around very roughly with it.
Love to see where you got to.
You have the opposite problem to me. I think you started rendering (and heavily at that, although it's a nice looking style) before you had the fundamental sketch down.
Problem is that, you're now...
Wonderful use of brushes there Duman. You really excel at more industrial design. What do you enjoy drawing?
Some WIPs and Final pieces I have uploaded elsewhere so I may as well post them here.
Might upload my other stuff just for here if I get the chance.
Makes me more confident I am nearing a level where I could be in production work.
Not quite yet, becuase you are awesome, but almost.
Need to practise geometric thigns like...
Yeah they are wierd...
By no means is Loomis a master at actually drawing stuff. He is a master at educating you how to draw stuff though.
You can't really objectively criticise a stylised piece like this.
And you've already signed it, so it's too late :)
Here is a selection of fixes, thanks for the input:
Kirpid: Agreed, the leg isn't THAT involved yet, check out the fixes below, to see if any are right. or atleast an improvement.
Well, is that becuase of the skewed knee?
So I need that foot out in front further to the right? I just don't want him leaning to much, and with lighting the figure might looks better. I need to...
Yeah, I tried to fix the angle and it didn't work.
Bai Fan, he's not on a slope, it's a skewed camera, I hope when I put in snow, it will make it clear. It's useful you can't tell it.
Man I hate this game.
That art direction was so overhyped, and it turned out to be a cel shaded charcter. Wish devs would learn cel shading is cheap.
Wonderful pieces though.
You are right he does look sad.
And nice to hear you didn't do the easier route.... Even though it's easier, it will be all the more awesome.
Well here we go, *ding ding* round two.
Here you go.
Will sort out the elbow. I was measuring it up with the foot length, and though I could let it slide, but it's not a big job by any means.
As for drapery, yes the ankle does look...
Yep sudging can be a nice technique.
I look forward to what you post. You can tell me if you think you'd like to see my paintover, I have done too much for it to be anything really very...
It really depends how you want the horns to bend, and having painted over it completely, just becuase I got caught up in it; and may I say the skin tones are excellent it seems there are a few...
I am doing a paintover here.
But I literally think it's the angle, and you need to avoid beign worried about the hair, the forehead as it is, and leave the smudge tool alone for the moment.
I have been mixing it up with composition recently. Starting right at the basics, almost like photography, where you find interesting lighting that frames your work, or alternately is just...
<3 WipEout HD
Respectfully disagree here.
I agree everyone has the ability regardless of artistic eyes, but that's everyone other than the 'beholder'.
As soon as you've looked at it for too long, you're...