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  1. Thread: Airship dogfight

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    It's probably too late to change it, but I liked...

    It's probably too late to change it, but I liked the slightly tilted horizon in the original version. :-) It was more dynamic and action-y. (My favorite composition was the black and white one.)
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  2. One quick comment about the subject matter...

    One quick comment about the subject matter itself: I don't think bright green grass would be growing right next to lava pits (or whatever they are). With all of the 1000+ degree molten rock spraying...
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    I like the style of the night time one. The last...

    I like the style of the night time one. The last one (with the floating islands) doesn't seem like the same style as the others though, and not just because it is day time. There is a lot more depth...
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    With some improvements and tweaks here and there,...

    With some improvements and tweaks here and there, I think the original style might work OK in a book for young children.

    If you're going for a "cool" painting targeting an older audience (concept...
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    A few quick thoughts: 1. It's hard to tell...

    A few quick thoughts:

    1. It's hard to tell where the horizon is.

    2. The lighting could be improved. The light source is a little inconsistent; it's mostly coming from the left it seems, but the...
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    Hmm...the composition is a little weird. I'm not...

    Hmm...the composition is a little weird. I'm not sure where I'm supposed to be looking (focal point), and the perspective seems to be off a little. Actually, I'm not really sure just what it is I'm...
  7. The colors actually aren't that bad IMO. What I'm...

    The colors actually aren't that bad IMO. What I'm noticing more is that the forms are a little hard to read. The lighting is OK if you just look at one small section of the image, but when you take...
  8. Thread: Assassin!

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    This is good advice. Also, the pose looks very...

    This is good advice.

    Also, the pose looks very unstable and uncomfortable.
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    The first one is pretty decent (to my eyes...

    The first one is pretty decent (to my eyes anyway). The values look good, as does the clothing. The anatomy appears OK too, though it's always hard to tell under so much cloth.

    The second one is...
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    Thanks for the critique. :-) Now that it's been...

    Thanks for the critique. :-) Now that it's been mentioned I do see the problem with her right arm/shoulder. I'll work on it and see if I can fix it.

    As for the face, yes I have a tendency to...
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    Pretty much (?) finished...

    This is a personal project I've been working on for a few weeks now. It's a girl in a sort of sci-fi setting, armed with two M1911s (hey, if 100 year old pistols are still in use today, who's to say...
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    Right off I noticed that the torso is too short....

    Right off I noticed that the torso is too short. The neck might be a little narrow, but if you're going for a stylized look it might be OK.

    Overall though I don't think it's too far off (regarding...
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    Art: They're all great, but I especially like the one...

    They're all great, but I especially like the one with the dude in the space suit (fifth from the top). It's just so clean and crisp, and the glowing weapons look like they're really glowing. Out of...
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    The real question is, just what does a cape look...

    The real question is, just what does a cape look like when it's blowing in ~500 MPH winds? ;-)
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    You can draw perspective lines on paper. It might...

    You can draw perspective lines on paper. It might take an extra minute or two, but it's possible. You just need a long ruler or straight edge of some sort.

    I have a very hard time drawing on a...
  16. I see lots of perspective, proportion, and...

    I see lots of perspective, proportion, and anatomy issues.

    The composition is probably the worst part though. It's hard to "read" and rather boring (and sometimes confusing). Centering the dude in...
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    This doesn't help you any, but I could swear I've...

    This doesn't help you any, but I could swear I've seen a composition very similar to your second image. It was book I have, Digital Painting Techniques (IIRC). The colors are very similar, the stance...
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    This probably isn't the critique you wanted, but...

    This probably isn't the critique you wanted, but I'm having a little difficulty reading the image. The objects and situation are a little vague or otherwise ambiguous.

    Which direction is the...
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    Poll: It isn't that bad for not having done much for...

    It isn't that bad for not having done much for people before.

    That said, it appears you don't have a solid understanding yet of the human body. You'd benefit greatly from studying human anatomy....
  20. Thread: RBA Sketchbook

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    SketchBook: Man, you've got some really good stuff here. I...

    Man, you've got some really good stuff here. I can't believe you haven't made a career out of this (yet).

    I watched your videos on Youtube and they were very insightful. BIG thanks for putting...
  21. Definitely much better than the original. The...

    Definitely much better than the original. The original looks like the mech/robot dude doesn't even care about what's going on. "Ehhh...maybe there are a few more enemies over there...maybe I'll fire...
  22. If you have trouble with values you might want to...

    If you have trouble with values you might want to try working in just grayscale. Once it looks good in black and white you can add color by using additional layers with the blending mode set to color.
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    For colors, just go darker. Maybe make her outfit...

    For colors, just go darker. Maybe make her outfit black, with colored accents here and there. As it is I'm not seeing Gothic or horror at all. I'd tell you to add skulls, chains, crosses, or other...
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    I don't have much to say about the composition or...

    I don't have much to say about the composition or lighting , but I do notice some problems with his anatomy. (I assume he's supposed to be a relatively normal human anyway.) His torso is a little too...
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    The clouds are a little better in this latest...

    The clouds are a little better in this latest version, but they are still the weakest part of the piece in my opinion. Maybe some different references would work better? You could also look at other...
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