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    Looks really good! I think it fits perfectly with...

    Looks really good! I think it fits perfectly with the brief - better than your previous guard did, imo. He looked a little too... tribal? with the face paint and horns.
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    @Velocity Kendall: That second one is amazing, I...

    @Velocity Kendall: That second one is amazing, I agree, but it's actually painted by John Singer Sargent :^^;:

    All right, as for crits... Good job on the first one, you have a very obvious focal...
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    The challenge, if I recall correctly, was to...

    The challenge, if I recall correctly, was to create either a shaman or a cook from the orc tribe, right?

    Well, I don't think there's enough "shaman" about this one yet. It's a good first step, but...
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    Hm. I think that storytelling-wise the original...

    Hm. I think that storytelling-wise the original picture was actually stronger. I like it a lot, in fact.

    In the final version there, he's staring into the pillar, his arm is pointing to the pillar...
  5. Thread: Red Wizard

    by Benjaminba
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    Red Wizard

    Hey guys,

    I was hoping to get a little feedback on this picture of a wizard I'm working on. I'm trying some things I'm not used to; strong colours, slightly more dynamic. But it's not quite there...
  6. Thread: Myrddraal

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    Great work so far. I agree with Venger as always...

    Great work so far. I agree with Venger as always :D

    I'm not entirely convinced that the crop is working for you. Have you considered expanding the canvas for a more vertical crop? Not sure it's...
  7. Thread: Bee girl

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    Well, the main thing left to do is to tighten up...

    Well, the main thing left to do is to tighten up the edges and define the forms more. Jawline should be sharper, nose and mouth look flat. Pay attention to your ref, especially to the subtle...
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    Promising scene so far! I agree with Venger about...

    Promising scene so far! I agree with Venger about adding more ninjas.

    The value structure you have in your thumbnails could be clearer overall, but more than that, I think you could strengthen the...
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    Her pose is part of it... It's not commanding or...

    Her pose is part of it... It's not commanding or intimidating. In fact, you could quite easily mistake her for being a captive of the monsters, the way her eyes are closed and her hands are behind...
  10. Thread: rocket kid

    by Benjaminba
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    I see. Sorry, it's difficult to explain these...

    I see. Sorry, it's difficult to explain these things! :) Well, the problem with the indents is that they curve inward - while the outside edges of the ship are straight. The ship looks dented in the...
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    The sketch isn't bad at all, but there are some...

    The sketch isn't bad at all, but there are some problems with the ellipses on the rocket. The top of the rocket, closest to us, is fine, but the ellipses on the bottom are quite flat. They have to be...
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    I think this piece has some promise! But you can...

    I think this piece has some promise! But you can do a lot more with the lighting setup you have right now - you can make it much more dramatic by introducing a stronger rim light and working out the...
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    Looks fantastic. Well done! I especially like the...

    Looks fantastic. Well done! I especially like the way you handled the background and the fire effect; reminds me a bit of Jon Foster, but still different.

    I don't have that much more to add. His...
  14. The figures are so small in the composition. I...

    The figures are so small in the composition. I guess I would've liked to zoom in on them a bit, but that's hard to change now. The water is bugging me, because the reflections follow the shape of the...
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    You might miss a few references, but it's not a...

    You might miss a few references, but it's not a big deal. It's only 45 pages and the story is pretty straightforward, so give it ago, I say :)
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    Jim Murray's Dota2 comic online!

    I thought I'd go ahead and link this here. It's a comic Jim Murray did for the game Dota 2. It's published online on the dota 2 blog, but I reckon a lot of you might not know about it.

    Read it...
  17. Thread: Need a push

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    Pretty solid start, but there's a few areas that...

    Pretty solid start, but there's a few areas that could be improved upon. He doesn't really have a waist; his hips attach pretty much directly to the chest. You need some reference for the hands,...
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    Heh, this is pretty wild! The overall idea of...

    Heh, this is pretty wild! The overall idea of being consumed by nature/roots comes through clearly, so that's good. Colours are fine. There's a lot of boring empty space on the left, though.

    There...
  19. Check this out:...

    Check this out: http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2010/01/color-underwater.html

    I wouldn't use a matte painting for ref, especially one that looks so photoshopped.
  20. SketchBook: I feel like it's time for an update, even though...

    I feel like it's time for an update, even though there's nothing special to show.. As always, I'd love to hear your feedback. It is always very helpful and I appreciate it very much!

    Samurai Nik -...
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    Looks good, you can definitely move on to...

    Looks good, you can definitely move on to colouring. The position and angle of the spear in the lower right feels a little uncomfortable to me; it's almost touching the edge of the canvas. I would...
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    What Jason said; it's lacking the conflict you...

    What Jason said; it's lacking the conflict you are trying to describe. The cattail is slightly phallic, btw. Maybe move it a bit. ;<
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    Looks great, good work so far! A little more...

    Looks great, good work so far! A little more colour variation in his face would be nice, I think. Remember the colour zones of the face:...
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    I think the design and silhouette could do with a...

    I think the design and silhouette could do with a little more 'ompf'! Broad hips and narrow shoulders isn't that scary. Unless you find the grandmotherly types scary, maybe. His black soul has been...
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    I can't resist the promise of cookies, so here...

    I can't resist the promise of cookies, so here goes..

    I like the new illustration - it's a nice little story with a pretty solid composition. You could add even more drama by bringing the airship...
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