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    SketchBook: Looks pretty good, the likeness is spot on. It...

    Looks pretty good, the likeness is spot on. It appears as though you used too much black, the skin looks very muddy in some areas. If you didn't use blacks then something is off with your keys. not a...
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    Looking pretty cool so far. There should be some...

    Looking pretty cool so far. There should be some bounce light from the golden object on the wall. Some would be hitting the water below and some would be rim lighting your creature which would also...
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    Very nice work all around, My crit is for the...

    Very nice work all around, My crit is for the Konk piece. Looks really good the only issue I see is that it appears to be raining but his specular high lights on his skin don't reflect that. He...
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    You're welcome, it's looking much better! Can't...

    You're welcome, it's looking much better! Can't wait to see it painted!
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    Find some reference with a similar pose, the...

    Find some reference with a similar pose, the perspective and foreshortening on his left arm is quite a bit off. Also try not to obscure the feet like that. It always looks like someone is trying to...
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    Hey there, not a bad start at all, are you going...

    Hey there, not a bad start at all, are you going to add a background?

    Some of the facial features are a bit lop sided, the tilt angle of his head suggests that his eye line diagonal would be...
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    Right now there needs to be something in there...

    Right now there needs to be something in there that gives it a sense of scale. The horse appears to be tiny at the moment compared to the ripples in the sand on the beach.

    Also the lighting is a...
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    Ah yes, but sometimes doing things over and over...

    Ah yes, but sometimes doing things over and over is the best way to learn!
  9. Hey there, I actually liked the one you posted...

    Hey there, I actually liked the one you posted the other day over the "finished" version. The lighting was better and I think you put too much detail in the finished one. Most old masters, when...
  10. Thread: snow leopard

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    Great! can't wait to see it :)

    Great! can't wait to see it :)
  11. Thread: snow leopard

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    nice work so far. It looks like your linear...

    nice work so far. It looks like your linear perspective is a little off in the background, especially on the ground plane, double check that. Also adding a little atmospheric perspective will help...
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    search in the tutorials, tips and tricks section...

    search in the tutorials, tips and tricks section of CA. There are TONS of tutorials and links to online sites.
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    looks like a decent design to me, I'd sit in it....

    looks like a decent design to me, I'd sit in it. Some areas however are hard to read because of the lack of contrast, i.e. the rear view where the highlight on the metal frame bleeds into the white...
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    hey there, I haven't seen this "Opal Child"...

    hey there, I haven't seen this "Opal Child" before, I like the mood the piece sets so far though!

    A couple of things:

    The facial proportions are off, as well as the angle of the nose. All lines...
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    I don't have any crits, just wanted to say this...

    I don't have any crits, just wanted to say this looks great! And I enjoyed looking through your process. Great work!
  16. The silhouette of Death was really hard to make...

    The silhouette of Death was really hard to make out I actually thought his head was back further at first and had to look really closely to see the opening in his hood. You might want to work on that...
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    Hey there, welcome back to drawing! that's...

    Hey there, welcome back to drawing! that's exciting!

    First off your friends are right so far. The anatomy is off quite a bit, all over in fact. Along with the notes you got on his torso, his knees...
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    Hey there, like the concept a lot. A couple of...

    Hey there, like the concept a lot. A couple of things:

    The perspective is quite off, it shouldn't be too hard to fix but you should go back in and actually plot out your horizon and vanishing...
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    this is pretty awesome! However I think if you...

    this is pretty awesome! However I think if you are going to have eye fx on one of them then they should be a little more exaggerated. Right now they feel too similar to the non fx version. It may...
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    Hey there, consider the rule of thirds here. It...

    Hey there, consider the rule of thirds here. It would be nice to have your wolf character on the first third line and the goalie on the last. With that said I would widen your canvas a bit so the two...
  21. Thread: Space pirate

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    Yeah, he's looking a bit stiff I'm afraid. In the...

    Yeah, he's looking a bit stiff I'm afraid. In the future you should just rough in the pose with thumb nails first then basic colors until you get the pose exactly the way you want it before you start...
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    Hey thanks for the input, Yeah I'm still working...

    Hey thanks for the input, Yeah I'm still working on it, it's taking me forever because I don't have a lot of free time these days. Yeah I'm still trying to figure out the fur, its going to be caked...
  23. to me it seems a little disjointed, like the face...

    to me it seems a little disjointed, like the face is very nicely rendered but the rest isn't. The face doesn't seem to go with the rest of the painting. I would work on rendering the rest of her body...
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    Hey there, looks like your Marines armor might be...

    Hey there, looks like your Marines armor might be a bit off too, I don't know because I don't play the game but I found this...
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    I don't think its a bad pose necessarily at all,...

    I don't think its a bad pose necessarily at all, I would however push it a little further and really exaggerate the "S" curve in her center line. I don't think it needs to be a super dynamic comic...
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