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try solidifying and simplifying plane changes by first having one singular light source. think simple planes with one light source, and work your way towards complex geometries.
your tempo is too fast for your current skill level. its affecting drawings from your mind. Slow it down without your style taking a hit. Pace yourself, and your outcome should be gold.
break down this beast into basic shapes in perspective and work your way into finer, smaller planes, through that process, you'll instantly spot your mistakes.
your in the right direction, good...
scorpion! what did i win?
-your plains in perspective is off. no horizon line was used im assuming?
-use hot colors for those yellow-ish light sources. what you have at the moment aren't...
lol. well done sir.
anyways, the perspective on him is all over the place. your ellipses on him (top of boots, belts, etc) need tweaking in terms of perspective, work on the perspective angle on...
lol, your only 18. At that tender age, you should suck up information like a sponge.
lol, this last one made me giggle.
anyways, your folds and stretch need work. especially on "big-boobed" girl's short-shorts. its just random lines. your ellipses needs work as well. learn to push...
i know you wanted him to look slender, but his physique is looking a bit teenager-ish.
Maybe bulking up his trapezius, and lowering his pectorals. And add a bit of clarity and...
love the style. no crit.
Letter "J" necklace.
hmmm...now that i look at it again. that kinda resembles a claw.
in that case, i'll shut up now. XD
nice, well done.
no constructive crit here.
just one thing though, assuming this is an amazon/south american tribal chick, i never knew they used roman alphabets in their native tongue.
On the other...
good composition. love the style. their facial expressions are priceless.
am i right? am i right??
what do i win?!
now draw ellipses and cylinders.
It seems you have the execution down for this piece.
Keep going, i'd love to see the end result.
Although i'd like to see a more saturated/hot sky/clouds i.e. those yellow elements...
fibula and tibia bones are too short.
your ellipses are a bit off in terms of perspective.
show better plane changes. And by that try showing more mass constructions i.e. boxes, rectangle,...
well thank you. stupid NDA wont allow me to post my latest WIP. oh well.
but just a small crit.
just a small muscular corrections in...
only crit is that to give a darker value in the dark areas to offset the white negative space.
option 1 and lol....also 2.
all the colors are flat.
a bit more of bright/hot/saturated colors.
ok, i'll bite.
what is it? :frustrated:
you have any life drawings?
that will gauge your awareness level.
And its reflecting in a lot of areas.