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  1. Thread: Leprosy

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    great details - twisted only suggestion I have is...

    great details - twisted only suggestion I have is the bicep in the foreground seems way to light compared to the rest but other then that... which is just a suggestion...
    This is a great rendition...
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    i also suggest cleaning up lines on the edge to...

    i also suggest cleaning up lines on the edge to help the effect.. edges are not definite in shading..

    Good start - as already said - you are totally in the right direction!
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    I think that the biggest problem here is the cut...

    I think that the biggest problem here is the cut off point for the pictures you posted.. at the bottom of the building where you cropped the picture it looks like the building is falling into...
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    really nice lines - just clean them up a bit I...

    really nice lines - just clean them up a bit

    I really like the idea you have for the armor thus far - I think you should make it more solid and start shadowing or finalizing it in the way that you...
  5. Thread: Horse Sketches

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    you have beautiful line work here.. I especially...

    you have beautiful line work here.. I especially love the details in the horses mains and tails.. They are truly exquisite creatures - and you have captured them beautifully in these sketches.
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    (my right) breast seems off arm is definitely...

    (my right) breast seems off

    arm is definitely short... very awkward

    overall - great pencil work and shading, this is a beautiful piece with gorgeous clean line work, detailing, and nicely...
  7. Thread: SpiderGod

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    excellent sculpture, you have a great sense of...

    excellent sculpture, you have a great sense of detail I have no real critique - all I can say is keep this coming it's great!
  8. Thread: Valentine

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    really cool idea.. he seems a bit small in...

    really cool idea.. he seems a bit small in propotion to her though.

    she looks good, aside from afore mentioned. really great concept!
  9. Thread: update!! :)

    by Serena-
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    this is good over all, my suggestion is you...

    this is good over all, my suggestion is you sharpen up the smoothness of your colors. It seems a bit separated now, no idea how to better put it. But the idea is great, the color is nice, it's coming...
  10. Thread: FF Shiva: WIP

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    definitely the first one.. which you said you...

    definitely the first one.. which you said you were already going with. nice use of color and light, good basic character design.
  11. Thread: Valentine

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    LMAO!!!! Hell yeah! Those were the most ANNOYING...

    LMAO!!!! Hell yeah! Those were the most ANNOYING commercials... "omg he went jarreds" oh my god DIE.

    Yes, now that's a valentine!
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    this is a beautiful and emotional piece. It fits...

    this is a beautiful and emotional piece. It fits very well with the idea of valentine's day, especially for those with lost loved ones, or loved ones far away and out of touch. The useage of a a-lot...
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    specs of chest hair can be sexy "teen wolf"...

    specs of chest hair can be sexy

    "teen wolf" chest hair, is not sexy... I'd suggest making it go by by. Even if he's the messenger of hell, why just his chest?

    The tattered wings are a really...
  14. Thread: Horse

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    1) the horse (at any pace) is going to have hair...

    1) the horse (at any pace) is going to have hair movement... the mane flopping down like that... well that's just not going to happen.

    2) Horses may flick their tails when running, but a horses...
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    this is a really good start But avoid the fine...

    this is a really good start

    But avoid the fine and neat details and mixing that with smudging.. stick to one style of shading... because it seems to be distracting from the main character the way...
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    beautiful colors and lighting effects, eyes are...

    beautiful colors and lighting effects, eyes are big - but it just adds to the cute effect. This is a great photoshop piece, especially with it's title. There could have been a bit more sharpness, but...
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    since this isn't finished... it's a really good...

    since this isn't finished... it's a really good piece as far as I can tell. It's coming along very nicely, and has GREAT potential, it's already a nice piece as it is. I'd just suggest more dramatic...
  18. Thread: diosa victoria

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    eh the anatomy here could use a lot of work...

    eh the anatomy here could use a lot of work really... the top half doesn't fit with the motion of the back half at all.. backs are never straight when the hips are curved in any position.. especially...
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    really good start, I like the emotion the color...

    really good start, I like the emotion the color useage envokes, great stuff :)
  20. Thread: 111concept

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    This is a very cool idea, very artsy, very...

    This is a very cool idea, very artsy, very original

    but also very hard to read lol

    Great stuff either way though.
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    eh hips are fine, if she's got some hip to her...

    eh hips are fine, if she's got some hip to her (or just a general hour glass figure, she has decent shoulders on her), though her rib cage does seem a bit big. Breasts would look a lot better if her...
  22. Thread: Dragon

    by Serena-
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    if this is meant to be a tattoo (i'm assuming so...

    if this is meant to be a tattoo (i'm assuming so since it was inspired by miami ink?) I suggest making the lines solid, and not scratchy.

    I think making the wings bigger to balance out the worm...
  23. (my left) shoulder is too low compared to the...

    (my left) shoulder is too low compared to the body, some men have sloped shoulders, but judging by this guys (my right) shoulder he does not (plus he's athletic, so it's highly unlikely) thus his...
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    I can only suggest defining this more, and...

    I can only suggest defining this more, and posting for further critique.

    As it is now it is a good start, with potential.
  25. Thread: 1st post

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    Seems like a lot of work, when you can just draw...

    Seems like a lot of work, when you can just draw a character sketch... and work out what you want to change outfit wise, hair wise, face wise, etcetera.

    Though what you've drawn in sections here...
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