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    There appear to be perspective problems,...

    There appear to be perspective problems, especially with the grouping of figures and the river. Also, your river seems to go uphill at one point. Also, I'd try to avoid placing the horizon in the...
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    My suggestion would be to work out the design on...

    My suggestion would be to work out the design on paper first. Right now it is really difficult to discern what we're looking at.
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    Poll: Man, that login timeout is a bee-otch! My...

    Man, that login timeout is a bee-otch!

    My votes...

    flamjr Lots of really nice design elements. The values are a bit flat and the lighting is inconsistent, but there are a million fun things...
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    His name? Rex.

    His name? Rex.
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    The composition is uninterestingly centered. The...

    The composition is uninterestingly centered. The values are so uniform that we're losing the figure. Same goes for the saturation. The figure's reflection is messed up.
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    Lots of fun stuff. I won't be finishing my...

    Lots of fun stuff. I won't be finishing my attempt in time, but thought I'd share my start. His special dish is his pants. The crew has learned to take at least one polite bite.

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  7. Thanks, JLamps. I hear what you're saying about...

    Thanks, JLamps. I hear what you're saying about people liking expressive pets. I was thinking more along the lines of a pet fish or insect. Something ornamental. I kind've liked the idea that one...
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    I think the image continues to improve. I've...

    I think the image continues to improve. I've played around with the values to make the face more of the focal point. I'm no expert. To my eye tweaking the lights and darks is an improvement. Hope...
  9. Thanks for your encouraging words, TimothyWood.

    Thanks for your encouraging words, TimothyWood.
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    The wolf design is much improved. I feel like...

    The wolf design is much improved. I feel like we're losing the figure against the background a bit, like the values need work to establish a focal point. If this were a magic card, it would be...
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    The values are REALLY flat, giving us no sense of...

    The values are REALLY flat, giving us no sense of form and no focal point. My eyes want to linger on the rich, well-rendered sky and look past the action.
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    Some thoughts... Your lighting is pretty...

    Some thoughts...

    Your lighting is pretty inconsistent. You really need to pay attention to where the light is coming from.

    The anatomy looks like guesswork. Study figure drawing.

    Placing...
  13. Thanks so much for the feedback, arenhaus. I...

    Thanks so much for the feedback, arenhaus. I totally agree about the lighting. I was ATTEMPTING to simulate a well-lit interior, trying to sell the perception that the creature is a small,...
  14. Thread: My drawins

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    You're asking for specific things to fix. I...

    You're asking for specific things to fix. I think you need to fix your inexperience in depicting figures by studying figure drawing. Look at the sketchbook section of conceptart.org. Many people...
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    I think you should work on your 'attaching an...

    I think you should work on your 'attaching an image' skills.
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    Also, in the future, you might get more responses...

    Also, in the future, you might get more responses if you post a single image for critique.
  17. Thread: My drawins

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    Things that jump out at me... Lighting and...

    Things that jump out at me...

    Lighting and values. The light sources are conflicting and the small range of values make the images.

    Perspective. For example, in the second image the...
  18. Another COW entry...would love to get some feedback

    The theme for this challenge was to design a creature that 'freshened' the air. Additionally it had to be appealing enough that people would keep one in their home. If I were to do it over again, I...
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    I like the attitude of the character. The...

    I like the attitude of the character. The proportions feel natural, and my limited-knowledged eyes don't see any glaring anatomy problems. The rendering of the shoulder spikes seems a bit hasty,...
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    I like some of the costume elements, especially...

    I like some of the costume elements, especially the scroll storage backpack. The anatomy looks like complete guesswork. The lighting is inconsistent and really flat. It isn't at all clear why he...
  21. Flame_Unquenchable I really like the idea that...

    Flame_Unquenchable I really like the idea that it feeds on volcanos. Right now it is difficult to distinguish the creature from the environment.

    Rob Powell Some nice thumbs. I think I like...
  22. That's a really nice start, PiedDeFer. ...

    That's a really nice start, PiedDeFer. Compositionally I think you'd be better off cropping it so the focal point isn't dead center in the image. Creature design-wise I'd like to see the beast...
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    Poll: Artist: DPFX Concept: Diaphania Florem They...

    Artist: DPFX

    Concept: Diaphania Florem

    They are very. Very. Expensive.
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    Flame_Unquenchable Nice start. The foliage...

    Flame_Unquenchable Nice start. The foliage doesn't look very aromatic...maybe its the earth tones. The values are a bit flat. Your creature has a lot of character and 'pet appeal'.

    Rob...
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    Also, bump up the saturation. I won't pollute...

    Also, bump up the saturation. I won't pollute your thread with another image, but I played around with the paintover, and richer colors made it pop nicely.
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