The eye looks a bit like a nose from the distance. I suggest moving it up to where the third-eye position (humans - above the eyes, on forehead).
That spearhead is pulling my eye away from the general. Id redirect it pointing at the general, and deafen the contrast until it blends into the gray.
I didn't think Id get a logical answer to my question - but wow, you guys provided me with excellent responses.
Glad you wrote that long post up for me, Vay. Read it all. I felt a lot of what you...