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  1. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v434/rocks_smell...

    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v434/rocks_smelly_socks/aaaa.jpg

    I hope it doesn't feel like I've raped your illustrations, I just find it easier to demonstrate rather than explain :P

    Overall...
  2. Ok the main thing that's bothering me here is...

    Ok the main thing that's bothering me here is that your creatue has two knees! This is especially obvious in the first and third picture. Quadruped antonomy is roughly equivant to human antomy, just...
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    It will be easier to tell what's wrong with the...

    It will be easier to tell what's wrong with the colours when you've blended it more but in comparision to your ref picture you've used far greyer colours, (which tend to make a figure lifeless), and...
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    The magma still doesn't look right, its too flat...

    The magma still doesn't look right, its too flat and plain. If you look at pictures of magma you'll notice that as the surface of it cools little "islands" which form a crusty darker surface over the...
  5. Art: I'm in love with that technique you used to...

    I'm in love with that technique you used to create motion in the gangster shooting pic.
  6. Looking pretty good... I think you've over...

    Looking pretty good... I think you've over defined the lips slightly, they look a bit joker-esk. Also he looks like he has a wider face in the photo than in the painting.
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    Whoops, I meant "an opportunity to draw them...

    Whoops, I meant "an opportunity to draw them darker" not smaller :P
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    haha, weird, I was actually looking at this piece...

    haha, weird, I was actually looking at this piece of yours on DA a few days ago... I think you watched me and I was flicking through your gallery :D

    Anyway, I did a paint over just to get some...
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    Lovely character and expression! The only...

    Lovely character and expression!

    The only thing that's bothering me is that I think you've over done the light coming though the armpit, it flattens the body slightly.
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    Lovely image! The only thing I can add that...

    Lovely image! The only thing I can add that hasn't been mentioned yet is the light behind the wings. The line of light you have coming through almost look like it's meant to be markings. I think this...
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    Really wonderfully rendered image you have here....

    Really wonderfully rendered image you have here. I was going to say that the composition isn't very dynamic, but if you're going to have a character up there it should look pretty good...
    The only...
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    Yes pretty much,i think its just that you've used...

    Yes pretty much,i think its just that you've used darker tones on her face, so the brighter chest sort of jumps out at you more.

    Ack. I'm not very coherent today :P
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    This maybe your aim, but it doesn't work...

    This maybe your aim, but it doesn't work brilliantly with the rest of the image, plus you should never really use total black. I reckon a better way to draw attention to the eyes would be to perhaps...
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    Ahh! I watch you on DA :P As for the image,...

    Ahh! I watch you on DA :P

    As for the image, loving her face & colours. I think you've over-done the back lighting on the cloth round her chest and made the folds too sharp, (it looks like the...
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    My two cents! I'm not sure if you were aiming...

    My two cents!

    I'm not sure if you were aiming for a stylized look, but I think her nose is a little long. Also the dark tones you've used only on eye area weaken the tones of the skin. You've also...
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    Art: Maybe my horse drawing skills might have some use...

    Maybe my horse drawing skills might have some use then after all :P Someone needs to tell my mother!
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    You've done the perspective quite nicely on the...

    You've done the perspective quite nicely on the image, and I like the sterile feel it has. My main point of concern would be the face, it just looks slightly strange! I think you've done the eyes and...
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    I love the way you've done the face in this...

    I love the way you've done the face in this picture, has a nice stylized quality to it, but from there on outwards it goes a little down hill.

    The hat's bothering me the most at the moment, it...
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    mmm... I'd try using some stronger lighting, with...

    mmm... I'd try using some stronger lighting, with sharper shadows. It'll probably mean deviating from your photo reference (I'm assuming you're using one here) but it'll give it more punch. Also, be...
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    10 Hours isn't a speed paint! I don't usually...

    10 Hours isn't a speed paint! I don't usually even spend that long on my normal drawings! D: Try 30 mins max or better yet, 10 min.

    As for this picture, I did a paint over so I could get a better...
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    Ahh, thank you! That pretty much hits the spot! :P

    Ahh, thank you! That pretty much hits the spot! :P
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    Stop using black lines! D: I think I can see...

    Stop using black lines! D:

    I think I can see what you're trying to do here, clouds at the bottom and the shadow of the clouds coming across the mountains. That type of shadow is hard to do at the...
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    Update

    Thank you guys for all your help! My internet went astray recently so I haven't be able to act on edward's and quasi's comments, so that will be amongst my next focus. I definitely agree the bike...
  24. I like the shading, I think you've achieved a...

    I like the shading, I think you've achieved a classical feel.
    I think that the arms need to be longer though, and she appears to have five fingers and no thumb on the hand on the left.
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    I did a paint over, and went a bit over the top...

    I did a paint over, and went a bit over the top :P I hope you dont mind!

    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v434/rocks_smelly_socks/ott.png

    But yer, basically de-saturate, decide on light...
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