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November 15th, 2008
Really funny stuff, thanks for sharing with us.
The pencil jar really seems to stand out to me. It doesn't seem to have any shadows on the back of the jar itself so it kinda looks like it just floated in.
I know its not a huge deal, but just...
I like the scales, but I think they need a little more definition so that they look like they are part of her skin and not just pantyhose or something. Also when you get down to the feet with them...
I agree with the arm positioning looking awkward, also for some reason it really bugs me that we can't see any part of her left hand. Even with the odd pose we should be able to at least see where it...
Looks pretty nice, quick suggestion for next time, thin out her fingers and set her eyebrows a little higher to give her a more feminine look. I'm a big fan of tough girls with swords so this really...
September 27th, 2008
That little kid in the first pic creeps me out to no end.
All your characters are amazing and I love how you use so much color, it really makes everything so vibrant it almost hurts.
Minigoth is right about the giraffe looking the most complete. I think it has alot to do with the expressiveness of his eyes. The other characters are cute, but not especially well defined and their...
September 26th, 2008
On the woman you've isolated her abdominal muscles too much making her seem overly masculine. Try using longer lines that run vertically up and down the torso to show the definition sans the six pack.
I'd fix that neck line, even if it was in the reference it doesn't look right and I think it would be better to just smooth it out a little at the hairline then to leave it in and have to keep...
Might wanna add some darker shadows to give her back a little more muscle tone and make her expression pop a more. She seems looks too yellow to me, but that could be the scan messing with the colors.
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