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  1. Thread: Lonely Scarecrow

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    shadow! the scarecrow would cast a scary shadow!...

    shadow! the scarecrow would cast a scary shadow!
    also the base of the wheat would be very dark, with all the moon's indirect light diffused.
    I'd like to see some individual stalks of grain/barley,...
  2. Thread: Crit me

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    I suck, you rule! Does that count as a crit? ...

    I suck, you rule! Does that count as a crit?
    Gee whiz, you're style is tight.
    ideas for improvement...
    Anyway, with horns, you could try '' less is more ''. meaning reduce horn volume by 60...
  3. random ideas: lose the cape in favor of...

    random ideas: lose the cape in favor of sillohuetes.

    separate the sillohuettes a bit more.

    bring in an elephant big.

    more mountains in the background, but not part of the composition,...
  4. Thread: comic

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    comic

    1822779
    Hi,
    This will be a single-page multi panel comic.
    Do you see any big problem with perspective or proportion or anything else that sticks out?

    It will be a painting for an art show, and...
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    Perspective, Cone of Vision, Narrow enough?

    Its a comic page with about 5 panels.

    In the middle, I'll have 2 buildings in the background.
    Before it goes any further, how can I get my composition into a floor plan?


    Are you able to see...
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    Thank you Velocity. thank you for your feedback...

    Thank you Velocity.
    thank you for your feedback on the subject.

    most of my problems are in the basic forms, etc (I read Jefx99's post)!

    but Space Elevator concept art...technical reality...
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    on the first one, if you can get her eyes to...

    on the first one, if you can get her eyes to focus on the specter, you'll have a winner.
    all this stuff is just top notch, in my amateur opinion.
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    thanks to Giacomo and Infernoguy, your comments...

    thanks to Giacomo and Infernoguy, your comments have helped clarify things. anyhoo, to wrap up the disaster, here it is without garnishments.
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    Another file to be deleted? What did I learn? I'm...

    Another file to be deleted? What did I learn? I'm not sure.

    What basics would you suggest?

    Since 1992, I've been doing still lifes, basic shapes/forms, landscapes, anatomy studies, composition...
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    Its the base of a Space Elevator. its a...

    Its the base of a
    Space Elevator.

    its a ribbon cable extending up into the sky with mechanical arms and reel at the base.
    The whole construction is on a floating platform like an oil rig.
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    general critique. form. readability

    does this read well, at all?
    what can I do to make it read better?
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    Art: this is all incredible.

    this is all incredible.
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    Boxes! This is from a single photo. What I...

    Boxes!
    This is from a single photo.

    What I think that I observed is that the helicopter must be smaller to have my chosen angle show the underside.
    Or else, I would be emulating fish-eye.
    ...
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    Tried the top one again but just put boxes in...

    Tried the top one again but just put boxes in perspective.
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    here they are larger. what do you mean that I...

    here they are larger. what do you mean that I have inconsistent VP's? I'm trying to use 2 point perspective. Some objects have angled (rubic's cube) off-kilter. I cannot fathom what is wrong.
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    pair paintings perspective close? redraw?

    I think the first has big problems.
    do I also need to redraw the second, below.

    very much appreciated.
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    help! am I learning?

    Hey folks,
    I have rendered all trying to use a set value scale.
    with using 1 specific shade for each area.

    what do I need to work on?
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    Its the opacity feature that's making it all...

    Its the opacity feature that's making it all fuzzy.
    anyhow, its almost finished,
    I plan to move back to light studies, and without the opacity option
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    all 16 below (2 sets) thanks again to everybody...

    all 16 below (2 sets)
    thanks again to everybody

    any of these decent?

    should I leave it for now, and go do general lighting practices for awhile before coming back to illustration?
  20. Thread: monster magic

    by dmal
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    listen to previous review by tinybird. but its...

    listen to previous review by tinybird.

    but its awesome! I think its over the top.
    if you do more work on it, then hammer in the details for anatomy.
    just ensure that the perspective and anatomy...
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    here are my thumbs. if any are good please let me...

    here are my thumbs. if any are good please let me know 1,2,3,4.
    i'm going to go for 16, and then workout a light study for the shapes of the winner.
    thanks to everybody for the feedback.
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    still life digital

    am i doing it right?
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    also, try painting her without clothes first....

    also, try painting her without clothes first.
    and then post it so we can assess it.
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    it looks finished to me. you can go look for a...

    it looks finished to me.
    you can go look for a similar pose on
    posemaniacs.com

    i expect that you will find what you are looking for on posemaniacs.

    failing that, go to 1 session of a figure...
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    Dragon Sacrifice. Noon Light at Zenith, help

    my main problem is that the sun is overhead in the background photo.
    what to do about that?
    add shadow to take it to into mid morning/afternoon?

    but what do you think is my big problem?
    what...
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