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I can totally dig this, post more!
No, I see what Doomgriever means, it just didn't happen to be well articulated. The lion's face is supposed to be more jowl-like. With how he has the lines, it looks like the lion has collagen...
Great textures! I'm not sure if the fuzzies really contribute to the intimidating nature of the spider/wasp, though.
Great style! My only critique would be the panel structure on the first page. Is a bleed onto two pages? Either way, it seems a bit confusing if the eye should read up or down.
Is this an...
I like your style. Is her crotch off?
Welcome to CA! A good idea is to make a sketchbook to upload what you draw so that you can continually get crits (Its a hypocritical statement of me, I know, I'm a bit lazy on that :X)
Fantastic environments, Groove! Good start on the girl
While I can't for the life of me understand what you are typing, I will offer my helpful crits. Looking at your site, you have a lot of stronger pieces than this can offer. Spawn/Mc Farlane... it's...
thats a beautiful landscape!
Personally, I don't like how the face is sharp and the rest of the picture is blurred. It makes the face look cut and pasted on, detracting from what would be a nice bust.
I also think you should...
Beautiful piece! The guy kneeling on the beach with his arms in the air looks odd... I think because usually when then kneel down, it's usually for cover.. and there's nothing in front of him to hide...
The legs are way too small for both of them, and she has impeccable back/abdominal muscles to hold herself up like that without his arm supporting her.
However, the coloring really works with the...
that's fantastic for being uncomfortable. I hate monkeys too.
Thank you so much!
^_^ Ninja assassination, Groove! What have I been telling people? Ninja assassination would make it all better
I'd have to go with elvis on this one... bit more variation from the pixilated bowzer I remember. though I do like the extra shots
I love the sketches, and I'm not one for complaining, but please, for the love of god, stop cutting your sketches off at the ankle or mid shin!!! it detracts sooo much from the artwork and it's such...
First off, wow. I get so messed up using pens and drawing.
Only crit- the composition. With the empty on the left and the main chunk of art on the right, it gives the impression that the beserker...
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Yes, yes it does. ^_^
Whooo... fantastic stuff there. Solid peices that make me filled with the envy.
I think people have summed it up well. No more smudging. ^_^ But it seems that you are working toward a more complete picture, instead of the general outlines and some shading.
It's good to see...
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Interesting concept, I like the details on the weapons. One crit though, and that's that his head looks asymmetrical, like his head is skewed to the right.
I think I'll go about redesigning some (all) of the NGW characters into a more realistic style... just have to pound out the flaws.