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    HARD EDGES. Look for the shadows and make some...

    HARD EDGES. Look for the shadows and make some more clean lines between light and shadow. Especially on the armour. Over all it looks unfinished as it lacks any defining strokes.
  2. Thread: Sunken Sub

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    yeah you need to work on your perspective for...

    yeah you need to work on your perspective for your images, next time properly construct your scene or do alot of practice on it
  3. Thread: Ornithopters

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    Hello Romero- leo! Nice piece, I think the...

    Hello Romero- leo! Nice piece, I think the composition and perspective are really strong for showing off the design of the ornithopter. However this is where the piece is lacking, I cant really see...
  4. Nice! Haha so cool to see. So strange as well, I...

    Nice! Haha so cool to see. So strange as well, I don't really know how to react. I think your right about the background, I might need to make it read more clearly, and I really like the colour out...
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    Whoops, sorry man. I guess it was a bit harsh. I...

    Whoops, sorry man. I guess it was a bit harsh. I was joking at the end though if you didn't get that. I never said my tumblr (which is what I'm assuming you have seen) was professional so tone down...
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    Okay, I can tell you how to improve some of the...

    Okay, I can tell you how to improve some of the bad stuff to make it more acceptable I suppose. Okay from your post on 23rd of Jan only the top post and the third are good enough to be in your...
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    Depth, style (brushwork), colour. Background...

    Depth, style (brushwork), colour. Background seems superfluous. Many things need work in this image, what worked? I don't know? Maybe the mouth is quite expressive. If your intention is to start...
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    There are good and there are bad pieces on this...

    There are good and there are bad pieces on this blog. I would suggest buying a website and selecting your best works and putting them up on there. Curate yourself and you will have greater success,...
  9. Alright, I got a painting I would like to see you...

    Alright, I got a painting I would like to see you try. Its one of my own WIP that im kind of stuck on. Would like to see you pimp it out with some glowy shit hahah.2175169
  10. Thread: Landscape retry

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    Hey Enemy, nice work, this is a very strong...

    Hey Enemy, nice work, this is a very strong composition. With some work I think it could make a really great portfolio piece. After you get a bit more practice in I really think this one is worth...
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    Okay, so I didnt really undestand the first part...

    Okay, so I didnt really undestand the first part of your post about translating it into 3-d, but the second paragraph I can work with.
    What you are missing is a solid light source. It is making it...
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    I feel like some of the more structural elements...

    I feel like some of the more structural elements need sharpening up, plus, where is your light source?
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    Nice one man. I think move on. Good showcase of...

    Nice one man. I think move on. Good showcase of your skills at this point.
    Notes:
    -consider blurring or working on the foreground sticks. They are a tad messy.
    -Those legs on the stairs are a...
  14. Thread: Wizard Painting

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    Okay.Here are some things to work on. However at...

    Okay.Here are some things to work on. However at this stage I would recommend just starting another image, you have done really well in touching this one up. He is starting to look like a rock star...
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    Fair call, I'll take it, thanks for the link btw....

    Fair call, I'll take it, thanks for the link btw. Ended up it was free as well looks like! ( i found a pdf after a google search with the entire book.)

    Stoneseeker, cheers man, thanks. Yeah I...
  16. woah, age creeping through there buddy. Its got...

    woah, age creeping through there buddy. Its got to do with everything. Because someone who starts at 40 has only another 40 or 50 years to master whatever it is they want to do. If you start a 15,...
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    Smarter than the average forum browser I see. Or...

    Smarter than the average forum browser I see. Or maybe just less lazy. I checked out your vimeo portfolio, its pretty damn profesh. Anyway, thanks a lot for this response. I really appreciate the...
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    Yo. Severely would be the wrong word but yes you...

    Yo. Severely would be the wrong word but yes you are right. I feel the character is too flat, and doesn't adhere to any perspective. The lines were how I formed the pose, but the perspective was too...
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    Thanks lovingit, I like that you took the time to...

    Thanks lovingit, I like that you took the time to even look at my blog. It not very updated at the moment and I am not sure on the direction I want to take my blog at the moment but thanks. If you...
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    Thanks for the replies guys. Really appreciate...

    Thanks for the replies guys. Really appreciate it.
    I'm really trying to work on my design and work flow at the moment. That's why I am trying things a particular way, to see what speed and what...
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    Stiff or clean cut? Line work critique.

    Looking for some opinions on this linework I have done for a character design. Any technical critiques are welcome as well.
    The linework is a preface to colouring/painting, and is not intended to...
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    Okay well, if you are trying to make an...

    Okay well, if you are trying to make an illustration or peice work like those artists then you are really going to have to clean your images up. When was the last time you saw draft linework in a...
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    I don't think it is very well designed. This...

    I don't think it is very well designed. This thing would never work unless it was super tiny. I think you should look at why you have designed this. If it is to be some huge fungal monster you need...
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    Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! I...

    Thanks so much for taking the time to reply!
    I will take a look at the colour studies you have recommended to me. I think I will go with an early morning light, as I really like the teal colour I...
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    Need lighting help

    Hey guys. This is a personal piece, for practice and to showcase my current skill level. I was just looking for any critique in general, but I have submitted it in this stage because of my personal...
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