Search Results - ConceptArt.org | Art Sketchbooks, Wacom, and Art Forum
Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Search:

Type: Posts; User: jady; Keyword(s):

Page 1 of 2 1 2

Search: Search took 0.06 seconds.

  1. Replies
    17
    Views
    3,513

    SketchBook: I drew some perspective lines over your first...

    I drew some perspective lines over your first sketch and I came up with three different horizon lines and a small problem with one of the fancy doors.

    If it's one point perspective, everything...
  2. Thread: The witch

    by jady
    Replies
    18
    Views
    1,387

    The only comment I have is that only the two...

    The only comment I have is that only the two central children look scared. I'm not sure what's going on with the child on the far left, but the one on the far right looks more curious than anything. ...
  3. Replies
    3
    Views
    379

    If those are monorail tracks, they would turn in...

    If those are monorail tracks, they would turn in profile with the track in order to keep supporting it, instead of remaining in strict profile regardless of the track direction. If the spacing is...
  4. Replies
    4
    Views
    749

    I think this piece suffers from a lack of focus...

    I think this piece suffers from a lack of focus and over-ornamentation in distracting areas. You've got this beautiful detail and value work in the rose and dangling accoutrements which is right next...
  5. Thread: Crit my IOW?

    by jady
    Replies
    10
    Views
    757

    She has one breast right in the middle of her...

    She has one breast right in the middle of her chest?
  6. Replies
    17
    Views
    3,513

    SketchBook: give or take measuring inaccuracies since this...

    give or take measuring inaccuracies since this wasn't a big photo, I've got perspective points lining up on the horizon line. I can't tell in your extrapolation, but it looks like you have lines...
  7. grin, no worries. both of my points are more...

    grin, no worries. both of my points are more subjective than indicating a problem, but i think they're worth considering or i wouldn't have mentioned them. logos/emblems on shirts are supposed to...
  8. Just a couple of things from my perspective: ...

    Just a couple of things from my perspective:

    I wouldn't crop the top half of the logo on the shirt, it should be designed to fit the space. No company wants their name to be unreadable.

    I am...
  9. Replies
    8
    Views
    939

    The ship doesn't look high enough off the water...

    The ship doesn't look high enough off the water for the propellers to not be IN the water.

    Keep in mind when you render the blades themselves, they'll be corkscrewed. I like the daisy look they...
  10. Replies
    13
    Views
    1,332

    SketchBook: When doing studies from still photos, you've...

    When doing studies from still photos, you've really got to pay more attention to the proportions of things. The negative spaces are all messed up with badly guessed angles and you don't seem to be...
  11. Thread: Jady's Jumble

    by jady
    Replies
    4
    Views
    616

    SketchBook: @zeichenwut: Are you sure about that? My figure...

    @zeichenwut: Are you sure about that? My figure drawing looks like a progression of contortionist sticks on their way to a circus. But that being said, it would be kind of nice to know I'm not the...
  12. Thread: Yoda

    by jady
    Replies
    6
    Views
    758

    It's very, very green. Are you going to be...

    It's very, very green. Are you going to be working in more color?

    The lightsaber you've sketched is more like lightdagger. The thing is as big as Yoda is normally.
  13. Thread: WIP Close up

    by jady
    Replies
    13
    Views
    920

    Her nose looks weird because the bridge isn't...

    Her nose looks weird because the bridge isn't sloping down between the eyes, instead being a solid rectangle on the face.

    The difference in focus between the two pieces is astounding.
  14. Thread: Jady's Jumble

    by jady
    Replies
    4
    Views
    616

    SketchBook: Jady's Jumble

    As was gently and diffidently queried by Bing66, if you're going to offer commentary on somebody's works-in-progress, it's really only fair to have your own up for oogling and critique.

    So okay, I...
  15. Thread: Cityscape WIP

    by jady
    Replies
    28
    Views
    1,481

    I do not mind at all, I understand exactly what...

    I do not mind at all, I understand exactly what you mean. I haven't posted a sketchbook at CA because I also lack confidence. You're right however, it's not very fair to be posting comments on other...
  16. Thread: Cityscape WIP

    by jady
    Replies
    28
    Views
    1,481

    go over the line! be not afraid! or words to...

    go over the line! be not afraid!

    or words to that effect (grin). the first sketch was kind of overcast smog and the second is cool dawn morning, so you've got two different versions of the same...
  17. Thread: Madman's WIP

    by jady
    Replies
    26
    Views
    2,365

    I just find myself wondering if we'd really see...

    I just find myself wondering if we'd really see that much back-ridge. The dragon is turned towards us as seen on the belly scales which means it's back is out of view but I can still see it. So my...
  18. Thread: Cityscape WIP

    by jady
    Replies
    28
    Views
    1,481

    This might sound fairly silly, but I think the...

    This might sound fairly silly, but I think the first sketch had way more oomph. The curvy leaning buildings and colors gave the concept a sort of freaky-carnival feeling that could easily have been...
  19. Replies
    19
    Views
    3,900

    #2, gives me a real sense of volume and scale....

    #2, gives me a real sense of volume and scale. the others just look really cramped and restricted.
  20. Thread: Desert Ruins

    by jady
    Replies
    14
    Views
    1,345

    1283201 I think this side of the image has the...

    1283201

    I think this side of the image has the most potential - the clouds, color and the shapes made by the foreground rocks and background sand look really interesting. I think if you just cut...
  21. Thread: Desert Ruins

    by jady
    Replies
    14
    Views
    1,345

    I understand that I'm supposed to be looking at...

    I understand that I'm supposed to be looking at the spider-thing in the right foreground because its the most contrasted, detailed thing in the picture but after staring at it for a couple of...
  22. Other than saying the hand on her ass seems like...

    Other than saying the hand on her ass seems like a cheesecake and the outstretched one has more movement going on (which seems to fit the theme of the competition better), it looks great from here....
  23. Replies
    168
    Views
    18,977

    I'm liking it. Gives the main lines an inverted...

    I'm liking it. Gives the main lines an inverted icecream cone feel, or maybe more like a cradle - it certainly adds some extra movement to the scene.

    By the texture/detail comment, I was just...
  24. Replies
    51
    Views
    4,509

    loved that movie, man. had Chris Makepeace in it...

    loved that movie, man. had Chris Makepeace in it which was all I needed since I was sincerely and earnestly adolescent at the time.
  25. Replies
    51
    Views
    4,509

    Played D&D and every other RPG system going for...

    Played D&D and every other RPG system going for ten years every Sunday night with the same crew. Eventually we burned out ;)

    Now I just play MMOs and make stuff up in my head.
Results 1 to 25 of 37
Page 1 of 2 1 2