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Not a whole lot to critique. I like it, good speed paint and great composition. The main problem I see with this piece is it just doesn't appear finished. Make sure you render your focal point(s)....
Hi, a critique on these pieces would be nice. I am considering moving the "Sun" slightly higher so the lighting is more correct, but I'd like to see your take on this piece. What vibe are you getting...
This thread is a good example of the importance of a solid focal point. Thanks for posting this. Even though you are not finished, because the focal point is so well done, it already looks wonderful!
I don't want to offend you, but I think the proportions, especially on the weight lifter are a major distraction. I think you may want to get some reference for this... The muscle tone is not as...
I will upload a walk-through to illustrate how I turn a bunch of copy 'n' pasted overlapped images to look more like oilpaint :) It's a fun way to turn something that looks extremely cheesy to...
To get my liquified textures, go Filter -> Liquified. ALSO don't try to liquify the entire painting, it sometimes crash photoshop. Lasso a portion of it before liquifying it.
Keep up the good work! I would suggest uploading slightly smaller files so it's easier to see though.
This is my semi-finished seascape I am working on right now.
I wanted to work with more mechanical things.
Over Spring break I created:
Experimenting with another photo-bash technique. This didn't go as well as I hoped, but I learned from it...
December 2013 to now
A tutorial I made for this piece on close-up planets
Some more of my 2013 work...
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Below are two photo-bash paintings which have been "liquified". I kinda like the results. These two pieces are about 1.5 years old....
Hi there, I call myself Ernest Tang, nicknames on the internet include Alasuya Lushanova, or Serenei.
My Current Project:
Below are some of my first digital paintings. All three of...
Hi, I recently did a cloud study of storms on Jupiter. What errors do you see? What could be improved?
Oh wow I'm an idiot, made a typo lol.
So far I have this.
Meant 500-2000 NOT 5000-2000
Totaling ALL your hours you've spent doing art, whether that would be painting or drawing on graphite or traditional medium, what is the general rough estimate of the...
Grey Goo outbreak would be an excellent concept of a frightening creature.
Damn lol that's rough...
1) Better light dynamics, the lighting is all very... flat if you will. Looking at your piece it appears the lighting is shining directly into your face. Instead, perhaps next time try...
Thank you very much, I knew something was missing from making this piece realistic, cast shadows, how could I forget about those O.o. Damn my memory.
Thanks for the feedback on the photo one.
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Thanks for the diagnostics on my work, I will present an updated piece on "Nightmare" some time later tonight more more feedback.
Good improvement, but I am still having trouble getting the read on the hand NOT holding the rifle... The illumination on her clothing is nice too.
As for the sun which I believe is you focal...