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    That's completely unproductive. There's no...

    That's completely unproductive. There's no "practice" in that and you'll learn nothing from it. @FallenLegend, do what @Grumpysaur says. @HowDoIArt, if you really believe what you said, do what...
  2. This. All my new clients that don't come highly...

    This. All my new clients that don't come highly recommended from someone I trust pay half up front, or they're not my new client.
  3. Well, my advice about focusing on your own work...

    Well, my advice about focusing on your own work kinda relies on you having at least searched for work. It seems you already recognize that at least part of what you're saying is BonkerS, and that's...
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    What would really help the image would be fixing...

    What would really help the image would be fixing the stuff lovingit pointed out, and even sorta already fixed for you through the paintover. The "to be or not to be" of any markings is insignificant...
  5. Basically this: Self-criticism can help you...

    Basically this: Self-criticism can help you improve (Note the CAN), but self-doubt gets you nowhere. You talk about "making it" like it's a specific point that will be reached. It's not. Are you good...
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    The tail feels very cartoony and non-natural...

    The tail feels very cartoony and non-natural compared to everything else. I think you should do some studies of lizard tails (which I'm guessing you're sorta going for) to get a feel for how they...
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    I was gonna comment on the values but you've...

    I was gonna comment on the values but you've already adressed that. Maybe you could find a way of pushing them even more but it's already loads improved. I'd say red feather, definitely. Nice work!
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    Viewing this on a mobile, all I see is a black...

    Viewing this on a mobile, all I see is a black square inside a white area. So you really need to work on your values and readability.

    Also, there's not really any norse "god of death" but rather...
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    Prolix summed it up pretty well. If you only like...

    Prolix summed it up pretty well. If you only like drawing one body type and one face, it's probably because you don't know any more. If you had a bigger repertoire, you most likely would enjoy using...
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    What Pete said; When in doubt, use a mirror.

    What Pete said; When in doubt, use a mirror.
  11. Sorry, I'm with pete here... What was your...

    Sorry, I'm with pete here... What was your original idea, how did you miss it and is it really a problem? Do you want critique on your piece, help realizing your idea or both?

    I don't know if this...
  12. The lack of anatomy in that mushed together...

    The lack of anatomy in that mushed together deltoid/bicep area really bothers me. In both versions. And the demon face (which is the main focal point) looks rather unrefined and sketchy in both...
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    You'll have to forgive me, but "this is my style"...

    You'll have to forgive me, but "this is my style" just sounds like a cop-out for only knowing how to draw one type of face and body type etc.

    You could do different faces and body types in the...
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    Looking good! Some things: - consistency of...

    Looking good! Some things:

    - consistency of the lighting
    - The body doesn't occupy space under the loincloth
    - hands aren't grabbing anything
    - clothes design around the hips are questionable...
  15. That's the shift in thinking we're looking for!...

    That's the shift in thinking we're looking for! Don't despair, that you're starting to notice this is really good news, it means you're on the right track!

    Obviously you don't have to do these...
  16. Thread: Codify

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    Because it could be both more communicative and...

    Because it could be both more communicative and prettier to look at.

    More importantly, why ask for critiques if you're gonna dispute things that could obviously be improved? Seriously?
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    There's another current thread with much the same...

    There's another current thread with much the same issues as you and lots of great tips if you're interested: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=275685
  18. This is looking a lot nicer already! But try to...

    This is looking a lot nicer already! But try to do them even more at an angle, they're still pretty dead-on. I know it's a bit of a strain, but try drawing the features f.e from above, in profile,...
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    Your proportions and anatomy is off. The head is...

    Your proportions and anatomy is off. The head is too big, the nose is completely whack etc... It looks like you tried to make the upper torso move towards us with foreshortening but messed the...
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    Yup, top right one is my pick too.

    Yup, top right one is my pick too.
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    Found your reference (you should post it) and I...

    Found your reference (you should post it) and I can say all your shapes are wrong. The shape of the jaw, the hair, eyes, mouth, nose etc etc. Turns out I did know the actress, which I couldn't tell...
  22. 1. Study Loomis 2. Study Bridgman 3. Lose...

    1. Study Loomis

    2. Study Bridgman

    3. Lose the watermarks.

    4. Keep at it!
  23. Much better! 1. The cowl shape is still a bit...

    Much better!

    1. The cowl shape is still a bit so-so around the skull. It's a lot better than before, but it still feels a bit cartoonish-abstracted.

    2. What's up with the super-long neck? It's...
  24. @Alicja: I want to see feature studies. Get in...

    @Alicja: I want to see feature studies. Get in close with a mirror and draw JUST your mouth from different angles. Then JUST your nose. Then JUST your eye etc etc. You need to break that layer of...
  25. +1 on the Loomis books, also Betty Edwards...

    +1 on the Loomis books, also Betty Edwards "Drawing on the right side of the brain" is a great beginner book. Keep it up!
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