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thank you for the crits (pills). because of the very little time i have to paint, ill probably just move to the next project... if i even get the chance, but i do remember the crits and will change...
another eye. there will probably a whole face next. then maby ill start on my logo-y thing.
this took ...an hour? i was watching dead like me at the same time.
i need help!
any one know how to put a pic by my name?
ok, but its past midnight. don't expect much.
I have been painting for 25 days. i want to reformat my comp. and then do a 30 day trial again. i have been painting every day and I'm trying to gain...
not perfect but much better.
much luv fanficbug
by the way both pics are mine. the first was done after two hours, the second is the same pic at about 15 minuts
so i decided to start painting. i downloaded a version of photoshop cs3 and am 25 days through the trial version. i was meaning to post my progress from the beginning, but it all sucked. not to say...
progress is good. i would suggest that you focus on the outline of the figure, and not the jibblets on the inside.
i like the way you render. took a look at the website, and you do some awesome
low poly models. rabbit looks like its from reiq? (if thats how u spell it)
i really like the style and the control.
sharpen the contrast a bit. pretty damn good though
spend more time drawing and painting. i know it sounds simple, and maybe ass like, but your lines are simple and the anatomy is incorrect. and change the chicks boob. her left boob is too high
complicate your edges
and study anatomy.
the dudes got a chicks waist.
cool, how long did it take?
characters are a bit static and uninteresting. the light needs to be reworked and you need to learn how to draw the figure better. your getting somewhere though, keep it up.
cool peice. id rework the face of the beast and cut the picture off at the neck.also, it needs to be a bit darker down there.
i love the colors though. its a cool looking style.
a bit short, cant read the letter well.
on a good note, your art is awesome.
first, work over the forms a bit. add a wider range of tone.
going against what someone else said, the picture only has to contain whats pictures, feet fading into black is fine. maybe take some...
like the copy, i think you have an eye. as for advice...
start drawing from references, everything at different angles. i see a general lack in definition in your drawings. keep it up and by the...
i like the studies, just keep drawing
wow. shocked at the pure volume of studies you have...
id like to see some of your finish work.
your drawings are static and naked, a sign of drawing infancy. i suggest if you want to look like a professional worth spending a scholorship on, you should start alternating between drawing from...
if you don't mind the suggestion, start drawing the outer edges of your figures with harder, crisper lines. it may not be your style, but i think it will contribute to your feel for anatomy.
good stuff, get some more up here if you want some cc.