comic-style (3pics)

[johnny78]

hi!
My name is John and I just wanted to introduce myself; I hope that I´m not in the wrong section :)
here are 3 pics I drew:
http://www.anticontent.com/pics/angel4.jpg

http://www.anticontent.com/pics/daemon-kanal2.jpg

and my first "concept-art"-try
http://www.anticontent.com/pics/subspeziesA-color.jpg

critics appreciated

greetings
johnny78

[zeroe]

quite a good start.
i think your lineart is good generally, although i do notice some mishaps in the anatomy section, for instance the monsters right hand. or the size of the body of the third chracter compared to his hands. But thats just a matter of practice i guess. Apart from that oyur coloring pretty solid, tho it looks a bit hastily done. You might want to use a larger variety of layers and brushes to add more texture and feel to the coloring.

[R_M]

Welcome to the boards!
you have some cool stuff.
I think you should work with anatomy some more. the last picture isn't obviously human, but a humanoid of some kind, but the stomach region is still to oblongated compared to basic anatomy.
I like the lightning in the second picture.

[johnny78]

hi zeroe!

I guess you are right... the hand looks a little bit deformed


and R_M!

actually, after having drawn comics (for my own) for years and having created exaggerated characters I think that I should go back to the naturalistic way I drew when I was in highschool.... studying again "men´s health" and "flex"magazines :)



thanks for your feedbacks
greetings
johnny78