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EraserX
June 18th, 2007, 11:36 PM
Crits?

extinctink
June 19th, 2007, 01:21 AM
I like the artwork, digdug it... Wondering if there are any similarities between this story and that of "Hollow World".

Eric Lofgren
June 22nd, 2007, 12:25 AM
I think it looks great. Very nice composition and the colours work very well. Along with the tight detailing. The only thing I can see to crit at this point is at the area of the Earth's molten core. The perpspective seems off in the way the interior core is sitting within the next layer. The ring of matter on this side of the core looks much more thinner than it is behind the core, where it should be the other way around. It should appear thinner on the backside of the core and thicker on the foreground side. Unless this was intentional, of course, or I'm missing something altogether (which is certainly possible).

Still, nice work!

sciboy
June 22nd, 2007, 01:51 AM
I always wondered where the dots went after Pacman got to them....

Nateman742
June 22nd, 2007, 02:32 AM
Awesome! One thing that really grabbed my eye, though, is that the upper curve on the cutout wedge shape gets straight too fast, and stays that way until it meets the lower curve. Kinda fucks with the perspective and makes the Earth look flat, which we should all know by now isn't true. But other than that I gotta say I'm floored, great work!