Random costume sketches

[Skeezer]

I've had some time to do my own work lately so here's the product of my wanderings.

http://isaac.fire-storm.net/costumes_01.jpg

http://isaac.fire-storm.net/FS-medred.jpg

http://isaac.fire-storm.net/character08.jpg

-Isaac

[killing.people]

yeah man those are rad!
you people amaze me everyday there is awesome work being produced, great job and nice meeting you skeezer.
did you want critique for these? i have been known for seeing stuff that wasnt there before. if you do tell me if you want, from the sound of it, you were just fuckin around and shared.
welp, laaaate!

-killing.skeezer

[davi]

AMAZING!
I'm drawing to do full body concepts, these give me alot of input in what i am doing wrong. Great work!

[davi]

I have a question, Is this the original size you started painting on? Or do you start higher then srink them to the shown size?

[TJ Verhagen]

oh thats cool! gj!

[Skeezer]

Hey Davi,

I generally start fairly large and then shrink it.

[davi]

thought so, I'm doing the same thing with a piece i'm doing now. Hope it works out. thanks ;)

[nova]

hey!

first of all, i don't like the background on the second one. it's too grey. while we're on the same topic, the third one's background sucks too. i don't know what it is, it's.. it's just.. i dunno, i'm at a total loss for words.

ok. let's keep it real yo. you don't stop, do you? these are awesome, guy. *gapes and stares in silence*

my favorite is the first one. coupla crits for ya. first, you're getting better and better at painting it's scary, especially at suggesting detail like you said you were working at. but for concepts, i think you need to figure out a way to still get the right amount of detail to express enough of your atttention to functionality. for example, in some areas like the line between the torso/shoulder, it's not completely clear what's going on there, if the two areas of color are stitched together, if the dark brown is a seperate piece and worn as a shrug [kind of a half sweater that only covers the shoulders and arms, stretching across the back], etc. in this case, my example's a little extreme.. just for future reference :)

mister robot is a stud.. i like how there's big areas of no detail, and in other areas, greebles that break it apart. has a bit of character, too :) your rendering job rocks.. it's so smooth and almost looks gell-y. the shapes are really really really neat; i love the necky part and the head. add some detail to the knees, since there's so much great detail and rendering going on around the midsection, but it fades out as it goes down, and doesn't look as good. if you want to keep the sketchiness, revisit it, so the quality is as great as the refined top portion. the feet! give them a little more importance, at least a cool, solid shape like you did for the thighs.

bottom chick is looking really good. i don't remember it looking any different the last time i saw it, or what critiques i gave ya. ummmm i dunno. there's some spots that need refining, i think, like the edge of the slit, right above the slit. there shold be a fold or a shadow or something there, unless that fabric is really thick. i know you mentioned something when you started painting that you leave out the detail on areas that don't matter, but in areas like her skirt, that lack of detail is somewhat distracting, and makes the painting look unfinished. something's up with her left wrist/hand. it's a hard pose to get. maybe paint her thumb in sticking out, gripping the pole.

jeez *scrolls up and rereads* i didn't mean to bash you that much, but you asked for it!


ps. Bob says hi, and to call him.. says you and him should go out on the boat and talk or something sometime :)

alright.. take care you,
- l

[Skeezer]

Damn girl, you're awsome.

I should tell you that more often. Thanks for the critique, you are right on the money, and always after my laziness=) I need someone to do it.

Shoot me an e-mail.

-Isaac