scarey mutant beast

[fungi]

heres somethin im working on right now, its a mutant beast monster which lives in swamps. Do u guys have any hints or suggestions on how to improve it? :) thnx dudes

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/a.facey/swampbeast%20colour%203.jpg

[Atomicfate]

specular highlights!

[El P.I.G.]

Great linework on this piece! I think more shadows on the initial drawing would have helped (like what you did under the neck) but you can get this same effect if you get more dark tones to create more depth (espically on the wrapped up arm). I think if you define your light source a bit more it could help also. Your drawing looks pretty solid. I dig the thick outlines, maybe put some more of those on the bandages as well. The overall 'texture' you created looks awesome.

[Your Face]

i agree with el pig..you need a more difined light source (two sources also helps alot) line work makes me drool..try and bring more of your texturing into you initial sketch..incorporate you great line work into you color should turn out the sweetness

[fungi]

thanks for the awsome replies ! i agree about the light source and shall try and do that. this is my first real attempt at photoshop and it aint easy :bash:

oh heres just the linework if ure interested

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/a.facey/sketch%203.jpg