French Hedgehog's doodles

[Narmo]

Hi everyone !
- first of all, sry for my rather vague english, I'm 1) French and 2) 16 years'old -

I'm not used to post in this section, usually I just stay eyes stucked on the screen admiring the mervels we have one this forum.

But, hey, here I am, 'cause I've few things to show you that request your critics, if you please.

(I'm new to the attachment thing too :blah: )

The last 2 ones are speed-paintings (between 1h and 2h) done in the past 2 days, using brushes that I founded on this forum - I've to make a research to tell u who did them - I tried to keep the same mood in both of them.

And here a few charcoal things, based on photos.

See ya,

Narmo, the French hedgehog.

[Andy P]

Cool start, I like your approach with the charcoals, they show a lot of confidence and have a lot of great energy. Particularly the top right portrait. The speed paints have some neat stuff goin on, but I think they lack focus. Even though they're abstract they should lead the veiwer's eye around and to something. Anyway, great start and keep the posts coming!

[Zoroko]

Love what you got so far, the vivid lines in the bird drawing is fantastic. Great sense of motion.

[Narmo]

Andy P => You're totally right about this lack of focus.. it's one of the numerous things I've got to learn :s But those speedpaint are the rare ones I did without any reference.
Zoroko => Thx !

This is what I'm more used to; speedpaintings based on photos; I wanted to learn a bit about the colors in landscapes...:
(and the last one is an entry for the teen challenge'mascott, cf the challenge arena forum)

More real sketches to come !