FIRST POST painting w/light

[Your Face]

this is my first post I hope to get some harsh feedback on this painting....what it's lacking, what could help push it more dynamicaly..any comment is welcome
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/Ihatebugs.jpg

[battlemonkey]

i wish i could paint like that... the part that gets me is his/her torso. i have no idea what goin on with it. that draws away from the face, i just keep staring at the torso trying to figure it out~ i think theyre legs? i bet if u clarified that part up, it'll help a bunch,
my 2 cents, good job~
great lighting with the eyes
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