Pencils - Sentry and Black Bolt

[Auralius]

Crits and comments appreciated.

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d148/Auralius2004/BlackBoltandSentry.jpg

[Bijutsu-san]

The only issues I see are on the character that is lower down. The arm on the right (our left) looks a bit stumpy. Possible fix could be lengethening the bicept/upper arm and/or adjusting the perspective on the forearm.

Also, his hips/waist seem to have vanished! Something with the belt and the positioning and the perspective make it look like his legs go into his stomach and like he has no groin. You gotta have a groin! how unhappy would you be without yours? XD

The rendering is well done on both, and the perspective is really good on the top figure!