thief_cont.

[recall]

here is an updated version of my previous post

i can't decide what to do w/ the background. i put a placeholder in for now.

does the character read very well?

my stuff often times needs clarification. w/ this, i have a little bit, still more?

thanks for any suggestions

-recall

[Deathelmm]

nice traditional feel to it. i do not like how the hands and feet are exagerated. the should be three times as small. if you could have her holding a cane with some stuff haning off it, that would look good. make sure she is holding it on the left side as well.