dagger and lady

[bellas]

hello thsi my lsa picture, I am practicing portraits, crits and comments to help me to improve, please. see you
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/daga.jpg

[R_M]

hi Bellas,
what strykes me the most is your attention to detail in your picture. the headband, the clothes and her hair are the strongest points. I dont think the shadow the dagger is casting on her face is working to well, but that might be because of the models facial structure that is rather extreme.
good picture though!

[bellas]

thanks for its comments, there am reupload to new version correcting some details, refresh to see ^^! I wait for more comments :bash:

[Fozzybar]

Fantastic job on the hair!

R_M is right about the shadow of the dagger...it was the first thing i noticed...

the hand seems a bit to large, but maybe this was your intention, since it's closer to the viewer...

[3bleadpencil]

hey....thought I might add a couple of suggestions....try to shorten her nose....I think it's a bit long....also her chin/jaw is a bit to big for her face......
Good detail overall
3B

[nardfrog]

her mouth and chin look a bit off, theyre not very femanin looking. And she should be careful with a dagger pointed at her face, she could lose an eye!