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Dalga
June 1st, 2007, 08:21 PM
... Carpe Diem...:))))
Reckage90
June 1st, 2007, 08:42 PM
Her left foot bothers me a little. It looks like if your foot was positioned in that way it would hurt alot.
Dalga
June 1st, 2007, 09:11 PM
Evgenija is a ballerina...so that, don't worry, Reckage90...:) Her left food wouldn't hurt not at all, because... Evgenija is very flexible, and... nonsuch of a woman..:)
Anthis
June 2nd, 2007, 06:54 AM
I think the piece is lacking a consistent light source. The shading looks good, but there is no real shadow, and she doesn't cast a shadow on the ground either.
I'm not sure about the little fence thing next to her right foot, it looks a bit awkward.
I really like the beach, sea and those cliffs, nice job on those.
tomwaits4noman
June 2nd, 2007, 07:10 AM
Agree with Anthis she could use some shadowing, alos skin seems a bit orangey more kind of perma tan rather than naturual tan, maybe a bit of shadow taking the colour down a tone or two.
also I am nhot sure about the perspective of her in relation to the background she seems a bit flat maybe it you lowered the horizon.
other than that yeah nice job on the textures on the landscape especially the grass below her feet.
Kaete
June 2nd, 2007, 11:35 PM
She is very, very orange. Which, oddly enough, I love! The surreal tan looks very tropical and warm, and I wouldn't change it a bit. However, it clashes horribly with her red hair. Red heads simply can't get that orange. You might get a zillion freckles, but never a nice toasty tan.
I think a nice brown hair might go ever so much better with the "tropical" theme you have going on. Just a suggestion.
More than the hair, the picture desperately needs more definition between the cliff she's sitting on and the trees below. I assume there's a cliff, because otherwise she's a fifty foot giant on a twenty foot stool sitting by the edge of the ocean. Part of the problem is that you treat the grass with nearly the same texture whether it's one foot or a hundred feet away - the same green dots. It might help to either soften one or other of the textures, or make the close grass less dotted and more long blades of grass.
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