1st Concepts: Hit Me (with those critiques Johnny Mneumonic style!)

[Mawhonic]

So I got inspired by this industry artist Craig Mullins. Yall probably know of him, but if you don't, check him out at www.goodbrush.com. I've been drawing on the computer for years but this is my 1st time posting on ConceptArt. This is an awesome site! Well, I churned out some of my latest stuff so enjoy and pleease critique. Thanks.

Quick question: how do you post text between the pictures?
Well, if you want to follow these descriptions-
1st pic - Name: Jamming before combat
2nd pic - Name: Dream of the Space Pirate - has a spidget of nudity
3rd pic - Name: Lightspeed, stars coalesce to memories - I don't know, just an abstract way of looking at space travel.
4th pic - Name: Marooned - yeah, the guy's got no head yet.
5th pic - Name: At the Calisto bar.

[Mawhonic]

Oh, sorry, just wanted to add these are all works in progress, but you know, wanted to get tips before I finished.

[Mawhonic]

Here's a last one, it's an older pic. It's called Sensory Deprivation. Eh, tried to make the girl look more asian but you decide. She's supposed to be some kind of test pilot for a hovering jetpack.

[Deathelmm]

HAHA. although the lack of.. actual quality is low. these concepts and flow and everything else is amazing yet superb. i like these. This is far different than what im use to seeing!! good work.

[Mawhonic]

Hey thanks alot. I really enjoy painting in this new style. But I guess what you mean by low quality is that the art is blury in some areas and denser in others. Do you think the images would be better all fleshed out or more loose as they are now? I could sharpen them up, but I was trying to learn a new art style.