character :: warcry

[Jushra]

loosely based on one of the four horsemen of the apocalypse, no horse, that'll be next
http://www.justinhrala.com/warcry.jpg

[Pigeon]

emphasis on loosely. Always good to see people working from general to specific. I look forward to you tightening this up.

You have some great ideas for the details of the figure. one thing i might suggest is to work on the composition of the piece. The composition could be a lot more dynamic. After looking at your website, a lot of your pieces seem to be just a figure centered in the picture plane. Which can be fine for figure concepts. You can take it to the next step, though, by thinking more about the use of the whole page. Try some simple things like placing the figure off center, or adding undetailed figures in the background.

Dean

[Erik Hageman]

i agree with pigeon. also, don't just open up to a more interesting composition, but try to place the figure at an angle or something, right now it's so symmetrical it's like a starfish with the head, legs, and bow.