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hotsalsaept
May 26th, 2007, 04:15 AM
I just felt like doing something.
noche
May 26th, 2007, 05:00 PM
um, critique center?
Shortydiva
May 28th, 2007, 01:09 PM
Her left arm is definitely WAY off if it's trying to connect to her shoulder. The same could be said about her right one if she's holding her gun like that. The way her hair flows is inconsistent, unless her hair really is poofy. She looks kinda manly. Her ears need to align with the top of her top eyes or slightly above, since her face is somewhat tilted down. We only see 2/3 of her mouth, yet her face is almost completely at the audience.
Overall, it's the clavicle area that bugs me a lot.
hotsalsaept
May 28th, 2007, 03:38 PM
Thanks, I'll make those changes.
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