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D.Red
May 25th, 2007, 04:49 AM
Hello again, I've been working on this most of the week. For some reason every time I open it I see it differently. Some times I've loved where it's going and other times I've thought it's a total disaster. I'm still not sure how this is going to turn out... I don't think I've ever loved 'and' hated anything I've been working on like this before.:\

I'm not going to be able to work on it for a couple of days and would really appreciate some second opinions on it before the bell rings for another round.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/DRed01/anderson.jpg

Thanks very much for taking a look.
All the best,
Duane.

JohnQ
May 25th, 2007, 05:04 AM
She is very attractive.
Great picture!

Sepulverture
May 25th, 2007, 10:01 AM
Nice illustration, but your light sources don't seem to jive. On those big spherical objects the light seems to be coming from the back, but the light source on her is very clearly coming from the front. If they are different light sources you might try to indicate that by using different colors for the light.

D.Red
May 31st, 2007, 01:28 PM
Thank you both for your comments. I couldn't quite face going back to Anderson just yet. I still can't quite make out what's bothering me about it so I had a go at something new today. It's quite a way off finished, but this is how it looks so far. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v691/DRed01/sinisterdexterwip.jpg

Cheers for taking a look,

All the best,
Duane.