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fungi
August 1st, 2003, 09:10 AM
just some random doodle

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/a.facey/sketch%204.jpg
fungi
August 4th, 2003, 05:00 PM
will i ever get a reply? lol
Chaser226
August 4th, 2003, 10:42 PM
work on that arm more, forearm needs to be bigger to look foreshortened. I love his expression though :p
fungi
August 5th, 2003, 01:05 AM
thank you chaser :) the arm is supposed to be like that though he isnt holding the sword towards me hes just holding it to cut bushes out of his way :)

anyways i might be wrong, thnx for the reply
PencilPunx
August 5th, 2003, 03:55 PM
I agree the arm looks a little small for the head/upper body. Perspective aside, it just looks too wimpy compared to the size of the head and how thick the neck is. Also, I think the blade of the sword looks like it was curved too much just to fit more of it in the image. Those issues aside, I really like the heads a lot, especially the sunken eyes on the creature in the foreground.
J.Peckham
August 6th, 2003, 05:53 AM
you color so well, why no coloring?
haiku
August 6th, 2003, 05:57 AM
Yeah, it seems you need to fix the arm a bit.
fungi
August 6th, 2003, 07:45 AM
wow thanks for all the great replies guys, there must be something wrong with the arm cus everyone except me seems to think so haha :). my colouring isnt very good at the moment j.peckham lol i hardly ever use photoshop cus im no good at it!! lol :chug:

thnx again