Shay, my Star Wars Character

[Drawnblud]

This is just a character I made up years ago...thought I would redo it.
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y112/Drawnblud/shay1.jpg
;)

[dumb_n00b]

What's up with her upper torso?

[Xazy]

To expand upon dumb_n00b's post, I'll add that the problem seems to be that her ribcage is too large compared to her waist and hips. I think it'd look better if you pull in the line that defines her back.