Captain Jonathan Archer

[zeroe]

mmm i was just doodling a bit from a photo ref, this one here
http://www.zerohotglue.com/images/archref.jpg

when i started to work a bit more intensely cause i found that i quite enjoyed painting him ^^. well im far from done but i wanted to ge tin some suggestions and crits before i carry on. I think the nose is off, and the mouth aswell. But i purposely left the ref so small so it would be more of a challenge ^^
btw the background sucks lol

http://www.zerohotglue.com/images/archerunfin.jpg

[zeroe]

here a small progress update
some crits would be nice oO

http://www.zerohotglue.com/images/archerunfin2.jpg

[tomi]

i like it so far, but try fixin' those ears...he starts looking like spoky (or whatever he's called)

:t.

[Michieru]

his forehead is too short you should lengthen it, and try to blend it together so it doesnt look so blocky and his head looks like its just a cm too far over to the right

[gorilla777]

i agree with the above comments. i'd also turn his head slighty off center. you currently have it so that it is perfectly straight. i'd also slope his shoulders a bit. its coming along.

[bbwolf]

yeah, lengthen the forehead, tilt the head a bit ti the side. Get rid of the "glow" around the ears. Maybe try a more smudgy brush.