My first painting!!!!!!

[yamianto]

I'd never painted anything and i'm proud of my first attempt, but i could use some suggestions for many other paintings to come..

yami

[~*CIN*~]

i take it this is canvas...your sig. draws my att. the most, paint over it, redo it [the sig i meen] the bricks fuzzy-ness is very random, sharp in some places yet fuzzy in others

[Doomgriever]

the bricks looks very.. drunk? ;D and hmm her upper body is really really short. her head a bit too big. hmm proportions overall off-

[Ferdinand Venter]

The first thing I see is that huge bricks. Frankly I don't care how "drunk" the bricks look. It's HUGE, but as a first painting it looks good accept for proportions also the picture looks flat and your signiture should be smaller. The end. I'm sorry if I'm to harsh but that's how you learn and that is through your mistakes.

Cheers