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swore
May 13th, 2007, 04:07 AM
hi~~~
i am seeing here for a long while now...great forum full of talents~~
and i want to share some recent works with u...C&C are welcome
http://bp3.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/RgT4MtpTU6I/AAAAAAAAAAc/g2_cDkS33eI/s1600-h/mud_2.jpg
http://bp1.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/RhUe6AbemEI/AAAAAAAAABc/mYxkQ0Rf5Dc/s1600-h/fat.jpg
http://bp0.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/RiEHN7Lu4xI/AAAAAAAAACs/citndTtVuOE/s1600-h/fat.jpg
http://bp3.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/RiJcdbLu41I/AAAAAAAAADM/ucgPZVKySoQ/s1600-h/boar.jpg
http://bp1.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/Ri_6DpiqL8I/AAAAAAAAAD0/VhWWz3jYbC0/s1600-h/black_shade.jpg
http://bp3.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/Ri_6NJiqL9I/AAAAAAAAAD8/6L5OsBTTw1M/s1600-h/black.jpg
http://bp1.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/Rj4I35iqL_I/AAAAAAAAAEQ/H6sYkgjO-ow/s1600-h/ponk.jpg
http://bp0.blogger.com/_5c5mpN2Ff44/Rj8-PZiqMFI/AAAAAAAAAFA/i_wIE21TU9k/s1600-h/1.jpg
thx for viewing:)

dumb_n00b
May 16th, 2007, 07:23 PM
I like them all, here are some critiques:

First two: Good job...but why must you model hair and cloth as part of the figure? 3D isn't clay, and I usually get my best results when I use different objects for different surfaces.

Third: Use reflection, not specularity. It works.

Fourth: Less symmetry please. It doesn't work...especially with something that hideous.

Fifth: There's too much of a dip under the nose. If you did this in a brushing application like ZBrush or Amorphium it's very easy to fall into, I'll admit. Also, you need to work on the eyes.