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Jimmy Scifi
July 30th, 2003, 02:35 PM
Hi all, This has been a few days in the making. an hour here and there when I get the chance. Flexing my untrained wacom muscles.

http://jimmyscifi.250free.com/lady.jpg

This is my second painting with my new wacom. starting to get the hang of it
3bleadpencil
July 30th, 2003, 03:33 PM
I think you just have to keep cracking at it.... and soon you'll be kicking ass...her ass and lower back seem a bit to small in comparison to her upper body. I really love her tits....I was just in the mood for some ....ahhhhh.
The eyes look a bit to big or alien like...but great job on the face....yeah I really like her tits, well done.
Regards
softdrawer
July 30th, 2003, 03:39 PM
it's not really that her ass is too small, its not in a good angle.i think it should be more on the left.

i would also fix her hair a litthe.... make them more soft and gentle... longer maybe ? ;)

anyway... this is really nice man... the lighting effect is great !

gj

alx
pleX
July 30th, 2003, 03:58 PM
yes I must agree with softdrawer, the perspective of her lower body is off, and yea it's a little to thin in the waist line area
I really dig her expression though, nice job man
I.was.ink
July 30th, 2003, 05:26 PM
The other guys have said what I was going to say crit wise, so its pointless to restate it. But this is pretty spiffy for your seond time using a wacom.

Keep up the practice.
hed|lamb
July 30th, 2003, 09:34 PM
Basically what has been said. Regardless, so far I like what you've done with your image.
alex_86
July 30th, 2003, 11:57 PM
Hi everyone

I just stumbled upon this forum and man I'm likin it so far...cudos Jimmy

Yea i gotta agree with softdrawer on this one. I dont think her ass is too small, its just that it needs to be swiveled to the left a bit, with more foreshortening

But if no one had said anything about the ass, my post would be precisely this:

"AWSOME MAN!!!" *gargles* :chug:
Jimmy Scifi
July 31st, 2003, 02:57 AM
Thank for the coments and crits guys. I can see exactly what you are saying. I think I was blinded by her tits. Gotta keep pushing on. Oh, and I used ref for this, incase some of you think I've got some mad imagination. C+C much appreciated.
Jimmy Sci fi. :D