WIP female

[ddame]

About to start back into this piece. Any comments or crits might help. Thanks.

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/female/FemaleFront.jpg

[R_M]

from what little there is, it seams you have a very good feeling for light and skintones, and also have the skills to render it right.
just remember to keep us updated!

[tomi]

lookin' good...have nothing to crit at the moment. wait...maybe her hips aren't that good...they seem kinda high too me. but keep on, will look great though

[ddame]

http://images.deviantart.com/i/a/2/a/Female_Front_WIP.jpg

Here an update. The idea is for Deja Thoris the Princess of Mars from the John Carter of Mars books

[I.was.ink]

The last update improved a lot of the problems, u had with the first one. The forearm was a tad long, and the legs were misproportioned and a bit wide. But thats all fixed now.:)

I love how you kept the gesture of the pose, and what a great silhouette. Just dont lose it when you've finished rendering the piece.

I can't wait to see this one finished, and btw, do you have any other artwork you can share with us?

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[Marie]

I really like this, especially the colors and the background colors/texture. Personal preference, I like the first one best :)

Something is bugging me when I get below the hips. I believe its her right leg and foot placement (the one we see to the left of the page) Should it be more towards the back?
Perhaps a perspective thing?

I like this piece a lot, keep working on it :) can't wait to see more updates.

[djfournr]

Awesome!! I love the texture and the light and the... yes. Its goood. The red helmet thingy adds some needed color.