Djungel enviroment

[okeidokei]

Hey! this is a piece ive been working on for a day or two, and im just stuck because i cant really look at it with fresh eyes, so i dont know if its too much and stuff, and i was also wondering if there's any improvements i can make on the sky particilary, but also in general. Thx!

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6537/visamiljosv1.jpg

[funfetus]

I'm no good at skies, but I'd say that overall the piece lacks a sense of depth. The foreground in particular looks flat -- almost like it's painted on a vertical board that's hung in front of the sky. I'd work on modeling the forms more.

[okeidokei]

Ah awsome, i will work on that, thx!