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Yaseck
July 30th, 2003, 07:27 AM
Just a quick pic I made today.

http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~yaseck/yasecknew/rysunki/skulona.jpg
gorilla777
July 30th, 2003, 09:18 AM
the lines are pretty good...but the blue and brown are just not working together.

a good start on the skin tone...get some reds and browns in there.
J.Peckham
July 30th, 2003, 11:33 AM
nice line quality, i don't think the colors are whats wrong either...it's the composition...it is way unbalanced toward the bottom of the image.not going to crit any further because it is a quickie.
JKP