Weary Warrior: Share your CC

[tsnipes]

Hey gang-

This pic is unfinished, but I wanted to get any cc that you may have.

It's a pic of a weary Warrior being supported by Jesus:
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9066/goodsoldierdu1.jpg

[Zilant]

The interplay with Light really hits that spiritual feeling home.
And I can't help but respect anyone whose mastered Clouds, much less made them obey for the sake of composition.
Simply beautiful.

I'm sure you'd like more than a verbal gawking. But I'm having trouble finding something to critique.
The head of the knight - and this is a stretch - feels a bit crunched down into his chest.
And if he's a Crusader, I wouldn't mind seeing some christian paraphenalia on the sheild and/or armor. If he's not, I think you need to do something to take the image out of the realm of Nameless Spiritual Being and into the realm of Jesus, specifically.

[ArtistInTraining001]

The top left looks a bit strange. A little empty...

[KonnA]

Very nice "concept" I understand the picture well, it would be nice to see some more detail maybe some slain foes...

(JC)

[Penabled]

Very good concept....my only crit...and barely that, is for the spear shaft...which seems awfully thin. A good spear shaft should be about 1.5-2 times the thickness of a man's finger. That one appears to be thinner than his fingers.

[tsnipes]

Thanks guys!

This is great and productive feedback.

Feel free to keep it coming.

[AmontilladoAg]

Those clouds are awesome, tsnipes! :) The warrior needs a bit longer neck, though.. and if you could show part of his face, it would make it clearer at first glance what's going on... Cool pic :teeth: keep 'em comin' ;)

[Reed Davis]

I love the concept, I agree with everyone else, the soldiers head looks scrunched, but other than that, great work