a design revisited but still needs help

[House Hatke]

I haven't really posted anything in awhile so I'm just going to throw this out here... It needs all kinda help I'm thinkin'

http://benanna.com/images/335.jpg

Oh, and here's a tree I drew during a meeting...just for fun.

http://benanna.com/images/336.jpg

Benwww.househatke.com (http://www.househatke.com)

[zeroe]

i think the main problems are the shortness of the neck, making it seem as if the head connects directly to the rest of the body and also throws of its perspective i think. Apart from that the right arm seems too short, i know theres some foreshortening going on, but its not really conveyed realistically. other than that not bad :D