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tcarlson
July 28th, 2003, 10:19 PM
This is an intro image for the first page on my webpage
It was a digital painting over a drawing.. with no reference...
It is about people representing themselves through there hands

http://www.tjcarlson.com/misc/hand.jpg

Swedish Chef
July 28th, 2003, 11:59 PM
Hey Tom, lookin good! My only critique is that the neck on the dude on the top seems a bit...um....I don't know, squishy? Doesn't look like there's any bones or structure in it. I think it's just sticking out too far. Maybe bring the whole head more towards the shoulders, that might fix it.

Ryan

softdrawer
July 29th, 2003, 06:36 PM
cool !... but id really like to see a background there.. ;) if possible !

nice work !

alx

J.Peckham
July 29th, 2003, 06:42 PM
the fat guy is awesome! i agree w. chef about the top guy. he has no muscles connecting his neck to his back, trapezious? anyway...it would be obscured in this pose..but i think you would see a bit of it.

tcarlson
July 31st, 2003, 02:20 AM
Yeah thanks Ryan I totally agree.. the sternomastoid ( or however you spell it) is going the wroung way it should connect to the clavicle.... It was right in the drawing.. but oh well

thanks man

Im going to be posting a new piece really soon.. I just started it today.. put in about 3 hours.. and Im totally feeling it... hopefully I can get it on concept tomarrow... It will be called" The Rise of the Proletariate"


Thanks for the fine comments...