Kiss

[Mmm]

A recent painting I did with the sketch.

[possessed]

I like it. I prefer the first version because it really enhances the mood I think you were going for. Nice use of lights and darks. The only thing I wanna crit is that I'm not sure whether they are standing, leaning against a wall or laying down.

[Mmm]

Thank you for your critique :D. It's true I definitely need to indicate a seat in there. I will keep working on this one for sure.

[NathanLong]

Very nice. Reminds me a little of Glen Barr.

[thundercake]

Great colors!

I think a little something of the expression in the girl's face was lost from the sketch to the painting...something about the line of the chin and the lips.